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TempestasRex — Face Down
Published: 2009-01-09 17:14:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Some may see their family,others see their light,
I see naught but blackness,
enclosing on your lies.
You call out to me,
saying my name,
you whisper unto the sea,
saying "We're the same."
I reach up from our abyss,
to quickly pull you in,
"Then we will drown together,
our fate shall be akin."
Face down beneath the waterline,
gazing into the deep,
The blackness now claims our lives,
it's finaly time we sleep.
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Comments: 11
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I love it!!! It is so deep; filled with such emotion. Many kudos to you my Apollo, your writing has taken me away again.
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Thank you sis 
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Its all good bro, hopefully all is going well for you. It's been so long since we have spoken. Miss you
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It has been, drop me a note on here sometime, I will likely respond no more than two days afterwards. Anyway, talk to you soon.
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You really do love your Opeth, don't you? 
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Haha your dad has amazing taste 
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Yeah, I like most of the same stuff he does... MOST being the operative word
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i love it
there is a lot of emotion in this
it is truly amazing how much emotion
can be packed into one word
or two 
or in a small poem like this
but altogether
really great 
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Glad to hear ya think so jess
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