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TempestasRex β€” Fire and Ice
Published: 2007-08-31 00:13:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description To die twice,
In both fire and ice,
I laugh at the fools who go to hell,
Once they leave their mortal shell,
For here I am in the land of insanity,
There is no more humanity,

I am not a woman, nor a man,
I am merely damned,
Not a fool, nor wise,
Merely despised,
In this land I do not die,
Instead I live… why?

Most people think of hell as dark,
Between heaven and hell, differnces stark,
Fire that will not consume,
Forever this is what fools assume,
I long for that sweet realm,
But instead, I went to hell,

There flows lava within the ice,
Ice that reflect the brilliance of the sky,
Snow falls here non stop,
Forever can you go out and walk,
Given snowy island by the endless sea,
This is what hell is to me,

At first I was so happy, for the first time,
But now I once again ask why,
For the snow falls forever, yet they win,
For it burns and chars the skin,
Light sparkles in the ice,
Intensly burning eyes,

The wind cuts and breaks your bones,
You scream and no one comes,
Nothing do I feel but pain and death,
His cold sweet carress,
Yes death has a hold of me,
Squezing and shaking me with glee,

But he will not take me, no,
To many souls watch this show,
All just a show to they,
Who rule hell each day,
Each hell changes for each guy,
But in the end it destroys your mind,

Lava flowing I wonder why,
Why would it not melt the ice,
Questions buring my soul,
And answers I cannot cull,
Bah, the more hell perturbs the mind,
The fewer answers will i find


To burn in fire or to burn in ice,
In the end no mere twice,
You do this for eternity,
Never another kind face will you see,
I run around without shelter,
In thiis cold how I swelter,

Hell is my new home,
And here I scream and put on my show,
Play there little pathetic game,
But now it is a dying shame,
For I cannot take, no not me!
Bring me my lover, my insanity…
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Comments: 12

Pyrox666xPheebs [2007-09-10 21:48:11 +0000 UTC]

This is incredibly deep : i love it intensely !

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TempestasRex In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2007-09-10 23:02:24 +0000 UTC]

YEAY!!! Thank you!



For such a comment i must sneak from the darkness and.... !!! lol

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-10 23:04:31 +0000 UTC]

AHHH THE glomp!!!!!!!!

I mega glomp Youuuuuu!!! !

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TempestasRex In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2007-09-10 23:12:53 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAHHHHH!H!H!H!!H!H! *oof* O.o Oww... LOL

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Batman-kicks-butt [2007-09-01 01:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of the poem Fire and Ice by Robert Frost. I like it though, very well written.

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TempestasRex In reply to Batman-kicks-butt [2007-09-01 01:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, i saw the 'To die twice...' Quote, and remembered that game and just ahd to write it lol.

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Batman-kicks-butt In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-01 16:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Well its really good.

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TempestasRex In reply to Batman-kicks-butt [2007-09-01 21:16:14 +0000 UTC]

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ink-4-blood [2007-09-01 01:03:50 +0000 UTC]

i like it. it's kinda... strange, and i imagine saying something like this if i was ever stoned, but it's very good. great language!

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TempestasRex In reply to ink-4-blood [2007-09-01 01:10:43 +0000 UTC]

lol, or insane! (which i suppose is like permanant stoned lol) Thanks XD

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blue-strawberry [2007-08-31 22:31:40 +0000 UTC]

great language there! Powerful!

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TempestasRex In reply to blue-strawberry [2007-08-31 22:34:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks XD

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