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TempestasRex — Merry-go-'round of Yore
Published: 2008-05-28 04:25:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Go dance around the merry go round,
And laugh and laugh while it all burns down,
Watch it fall as black ashen rain,
Destroyed its past for what it became,
Black from pink and death from life,
Now loved by those who wished it spite,
Now that is has sacrificed all it had,
It can fit in with all the latest fads,
No longer does it make children smile,
For now it is one of the rank and file,
It no longer stands out amongst the rest,
Now it lies with the rest, just another broken mess,

I miss that sweet merry go 'round,
There's not another like it to be found,
The moral of this story is,
Don't listen to the mean kids,
Instead listen to those who care,
To those who miss you, now that you're not there.
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Comments: 5

Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-06-03 08:30:10 +0000 UTC]

This is so sweet

Don't think it needed the second verse though
The first says it all

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TempestasRex In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-06-03 18:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Meh, the second verse I felt was needed because the first was a metaphor, and I want people to get it more than I want it to be a work of art. More meant for someone to read, than anything. Sadly the parties I wish to read this never will...

I am glad you liked it though *hugs*

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to TempestasRex [2008-06-04 10:17:34 +0000 UTC]

I see what you mean ^_^

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kara-vamp [2008-05-28 10:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Sweet babes. Well written and has very deep meaning. Love it

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TempestasRex In reply to kara-vamp [2008-05-28 16:54:54 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thank you greatly dear Glad you enjoyed it

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