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MorbisPsyche [2008-01-07 04:52:58 +0000 UTC]
cry... eh overdramatic, male emo, definately not, we still have violence hidden in our writings, both of us. And that is the beautiful things... emotion mixed with violence... makes for good writing and reading... I love the poem, gripping, heartfelt, shock... almost like what people say about movies... only your poem is so much better. I like it, alot.
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TempestasRex In reply to munkeeboi [2008-01-06 21:03:33 +0000 UTC]
I know, it was a terrible day that...
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Dreshanda [2008-01-03 01:19:41 +0000 UTC]
...I almost cried reading this.... *wipes up the little tears around her eyes*
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TempestasRex In reply to Dreshanda [2008-01-03 02:24:24 +0000 UTC]
I know... The raw emotion... portrayed in every way I have learned how... I odn't mean to sound arrogant, but I think it is beautiful...
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Dreshanda In reply to TempestasRex [2008-01-03 02:36:45 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was beautiful too. Raw emotion is so rare....
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TempestasRex In reply to Dreshanda [2008-01-03 02:41:03 +0000 UTC]
It takes alot to write as such... but sometimes one must bear their soul to others... *sniff*
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Dreshanda In reply to TempestasRex [2008-01-03 02:42:56 +0000 UTC]
*lets those words sit in her mind....*
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