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TempestasRex — Stranded... devastation...
Published: 2008-01-03 00:49:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description Stranded far from home,
Locked in my desolate throne,
So alone and lost,
Wishing escape but for the cost...
Belittled, angered and scorned,
All is far away and forelorn,
The thing I need, I cannot find,
But I can't just sit and bide my time,
The crimes I commited against nature,
Sure to bring others wrath and anger,
Devastation, I've destroyed my home,
Desacration, I've befouled my throne.

So what shall I do since I'm stranded,
And I don't have a roll...
WELL TO PROVE I'M A MAN,
I SHALL WIPE IT WITH MY HAND!!
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Comments: 15

MorbisPsyche [2008-01-07 04:52:58 +0000 UTC]

cry... eh overdramatic, male emo, definately not, we still have violence hidden in our writings, both of us. And that is the beautiful things... emotion mixed with violence... makes for good writing and reading... I love the poem, gripping, heartfelt, shock... almost like what people say about movies... only your poem is so much better. I like it, alot.

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TempestasRex In reply to MorbisPsyche [2008-01-07 04:55:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you man It really got out what I was needing to say. Glad you enjoyed my saying it XD

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munkeeboi [2008-01-06 17:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Bloody shit-house!

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TempestasRex In reply to munkeeboi [2008-01-06 21:03:33 +0000 UTC]

I know, it was a terrible day that...

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blue-strawberry [2008-01-04 12:44:07 +0000 UTC]

pffffft. *laughs*

you know, some people use humour as a defence mechanism

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TempestasRex In reply to blue-strawberry [2008-01-04 15:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, yes and other use oblivious attitudes, and subject changing etc I however do not have a defense mechanism because I am invincible

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blue-strawberry In reply to TempestasRex [2008-01-09 12:27:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure that must be another defence mechanism (saying youre invincible)

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TempestasRex In reply to blue-strawberry [2008-01-09 14:06:18 +0000 UTC]

THAT may be true

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ink-4-blood [2008-01-03 03:40:00 +0000 UTC]

you suck. i hate you.

XP

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TempestasRex In reply to ink-4-blood [2008-01-03 03:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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Dreshanda [2008-01-03 01:19:41 +0000 UTC]

...I almost cried reading this.... *wipes up the little tears around her eyes*

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TempestasRex In reply to Dreshanda [2008-01-03 02:24:24 +0000 UTC]

I know... The raw emotion... portrayed in every way I have learned how... I odn't mean to sound arrogant, but I think it is beautiful...

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Dreshanda In reply to TempestasRex [2008-01-03 02:36:45 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was beautiful too. Raw emotion is so rare....

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TempestasRex In reply to Dreshanda [2008-01-03 02:41:03 +0000 UTC]

It takes alot to write as such... but sometimes one must bear their soul to others... *sniff*

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Dreshanda In reply to TempestasRex [2008-01-03 02:42:56 +0000 UTC]

*lets those words sit in her mind....*

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