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TempestasRex — Why did you hurt me so?
Published: 2007-08-26 21:27:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 245; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description My life is now a swirling pit,
Crying on the ground I sit,
You hurt me so ruthlessly,
It almost seemed to bring you glee,
You cannot give back the joy you stole,
you rened me mind and soul,
I cannot breathe I cannot see,
Your malice hath rutured me,
My eyes full of tears,
Brought by crushing trust built over years,
You used to calm all my fears and woes,
But not it is you I loathe,
I scream I cry I call,
‘Why’d you hit me in the balls?’
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Comments: 22

DarlingAngel0565 [2007-09-16 01:00:50 +0000 UTC]

This is great, it was deep in the beginning,
then i was reading the last line, and started lmao!
Nice one

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TempestasRex In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-09-16 01:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I like making a mountain out of a molehill

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-16 01:33:29 +0000 UTC]

Well you did just that...lol

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LoveSlayingDarkness [2007-09-13 15:48:00 +0000 UTC]



Well written and hilarious.

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TempestasRex In reply to LoveSlayingDarkness [2007-09-13 18:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thank you!

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LoveSlayingDarkness In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-13 20:15:27 +0000 UTC]

your welcome.

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135711cal [2007-09-12 21:54:00 +0000 UTC]

nicely done,

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TempestasRex In reply to 135711cal [2007-09-12 23:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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135711cal In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-13 01:17:59 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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blue-strawberry [2007-08-27 09:44:03 +0000 UTC]



Very good! You had me going until the last line!

Zaneness rocks

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TempestasRex In reply to blue-strawberry [2007-08-28 01:52:41 +0000 UTC]

LOL I KNOW! I WISH I KNEW THE GUY! HE SO TOTALLY ROCKS I WANT HIS AUTOGRAPH!

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blue-strawberry In reply to TempestasRex [2007-08-28 07:35:06 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW! I would SO sleep on the street all night just to meet him
And OMG if he touched my hand I think I might die! I certainly wouldn't wash!!

(did I take it too far )

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TempestasRex In reply to blue-strawberry [2007-08-28 15:39:15 +0000 UTC]

I didn't when i did that! I dont think he is gay though so when he punched me i understood...

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ink-4-blood [2007-08-27 06:37:05 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDD




i'm sorry, this is fekking HILARIOUS!!!!!!




that's just perfect!



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TempestasRex In reply to ink-4-blood [2007-08-27 06:46:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you XD Just the effect i was looking for XD

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ink-4-blood In reply to TempestasRex [2007-08-27 15:53:58 +0000 UTC]

lol. you're such a dork, hun. XD

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TempestasRex In reply to ink-4-blood [2007-08-28 01:55:00 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!

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EMOisLOOOVE [2007-08-27 02:59:12 +0000 UTC]

wow, so deep until the last line. lol. Zaneness it sure is, love! I love I cannot breathe I cannot see!!! XD Awesomeful!

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TempestasRex In reply to EMOisLOOOVE [2007-08-27 04:09:45 +0000 UTC]

YEAY! lol thank you

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EMOisLOOOVE In reply to TempestasRex [2007-08-27 15:48:22 +0000 UTC]

np

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Pyrox666xPheebs [2007-08-26 21:38:16 +0000 UTC]

Thats a very deep and funny poem... at the same time

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TempestasRex In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2007-08-26 21:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you XD

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