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Tempestwulf — A Mothers Love

Published: 2012-01-02 09:26:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 1231; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 33
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Description WWWWWAAAIIIITTTT. Put on some sad music when you read this, it'll make you sniffle so bad and probably sob too.

(p.s. I did)
(p.p.s Holy crap, I had to walk away when this was half written)


A young Javalaina Shieldon, unable to sleep one night, stares at a singular and stunningly bright start twinkling in the night sky above. Her mind wanders with tiredness and the words come like a flood from her heart as she thinks of her deceased mother Goldaina Shimerlyn.

Behind her, and unseen, her mother sits in an angelic state listening to the beautiful words and dedication being made. She is happy, with tears in her eyes, that indeed she was not forgotten and that Javalaina remembers her.

"Mother...

There is no greater honor then to live for your children.
There is no greater honor then to be a parent.
Nothing could ever replace the feeling of being a parent.
Nothing could ever replace the feeling you did your best.
History will remember you for the life you lived.
Your children will remember you for the life they lived.
You carried them for 9 months and until your passing days.
They carry you in their hearts for all eternity.
Let not the pages of time turn without the words being read.
Let not the annuals of time pass without your guiding light.
It is your voice, your touch, your smile that brought comfort.
It was their voice, their touch, their smile that brought comfort.
You were, you are, you always will be mama, mom, mother.
They were, they are, they always will be son, hun, darling.
A mothers duty is never bias, it's purposeful.
A childs duty is to learn and trust their mothers word.

You gave your time, your patience, you life for them so that they may live, love and bring into the world their own foals. Even though you are not here now you are the beacon that they follow and the example the strive to be.

Your duty is not over, it never was. You are merely the hoof on their shoulder, pointing them down the righteous path now.

Thank you mother, I will never forget you and the penultimate sacrifice you made so papa and I shall live."

Goldaina/Javalaina (c)
Original Shrug (c)
Cause of emotional wrecks (c)
MLP (c) &
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Comments: 40

GaryD12 [2012-01-03 16:14:49 +0000 UTC]

I don't know why, but she reminds of Kaimanawa for some reasons...

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Tempestwulf In reply to GaryD12 [2012-01-03 19:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Blonde hair, white coat, wings. Although the wings are symbolic only lol I think of Kai every time I see a white/blonde pony.

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GaryD12 In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-03 20:02:01 +0000 UTC]

LOL I was just saying XD

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Tempestwulf In reply to GaryD12 [2012-01-03 20:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I knew that lol

But yea. One of my friends had a similar sailor pony called Kai Shore with similar, lighter, colours. Funny how things like that pop up now and then.

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GaryD12 In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-03 20:22:39 +0000 UTC]

<.< >.> Maybe there's a secret clan of Kai's XD

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Tempestwulf In reply to GaryD12 [2012-01-03 20:29:13 +0000 UTC]

*plays RA2 Hell March* Not at all >.>;

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GaryD12 In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-03 20:46:37 +0000 UTC]

Are you sure?

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Spartkle [2012-01-03 05:36:42 +0000 UTC]

SPAAAAARRRKLEZ. <3

Oh, that so sad :< *sniff*

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Tempestwulf In reply to Spartkle [2012-01-03 08:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Sparkly angels is sparkly. Like the transparent wings too? They came out perfect.

Oh and I'm working on a special something something.

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Spartkle In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-04 02:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I noticed that when I faved it. Sooo, cool.

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Skeetz11 [2012-01-02 20:29:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thats a very touching story/poem. Not even words could describe how wonderful and true it is. I love it.

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Tempestwulf In reply to Skeetz11 [2012-01-02 20:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Awww shucks *draws circle in carpet* I appreciate that. hehehe I love writing stuff like that as it's the emotion behind the picture that needs to be felt too.

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Skeetz11 In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-02 20:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Anytime. I love writing stuff like that too lolz and i see.

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unitoone [2012-01-02 20:19:46 +0000 UTC]

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Tempestwulf In reply to unitoone [2012-01-02 20:36:24 +0000 UTC]

It's okies, she gave her life with honor and sacrafice so others may live.

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DanceWithTheWolves [2012-01-02 19:37:07 +0000 UTC]

SO.
MUSH.
SPARKLES!!!

(nice job by the way!)

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Tempestwulf In reply to DanceWithTheWolves [2012-01-02 19:51:25 +0000 UTC]

SO MANY SPARKLY SPARKLIES Gives the right look to her character, very angelic.

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DanceWithTheWolves In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-02 19:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Yes. She is very pretty!

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DeadZealot95 [2012-01-02 17:22:07 +0000 UTC]

D-Damn Tempest! ;w; You almost made me cry there! Anyways, You did a wonderful job on yet another shrug pony ^u^ So now you have 2 shrug ponies that make people cry X'D

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Tempestwulf In reply to DeadZealot95 [2012-01-02 19:49:52 +0000 UTC]

^^ Sorry bro. I have a knack for making people reach the deepest parts of their emotions.

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XVanilla-TwilightX [2012-01-02 16:22:14 +0000 UTC]

nawwwwww she looks cute :3

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Tempestwulf In reply to XVanilla-TwilightX [2012-01-02 19:47:37 +0000 UTC]

She is, such a lovely character.

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XVanilla-TwilightX In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-02 19:49:17 +0000 UTC]

sure is

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kyo4kusanagi [2012-01-02 12:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah mother,she is the best friends and a best person you ever have in your life...... I cried with joy reading this...

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Tempestwulf In reply to kyo4kusanagi [2012-01-02 19:47:25 +0000 UTC]

I have stirred up emotions that people may not normally show, I'm an evil genius but good at what I do.

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kyo4kusanagi In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-02 20:07:14 +0000 UTC]

great XD

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PUFFINSTUDIOS [2012-01-02 12:15:38 +0000 UTC]

awesome picture!

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Tempestwulf In reply to PUFFINSTUDIOS [2012-01-02 19:44:46 +0000 UTC]

Thx, it's really touching.

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firefoxlies [2012-01-02 09:57:48 +0000 UTC]

i feel so horrible after reading this... i didnt cry... but it made me feel pain

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Tempestwulf In reply to firefoxlies [2012-01-02 10:02:11 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I should be proud of myself or feel terrible for stirring up the emotions.

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firefoxlies In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-02 10:15:19 +0000 UTC]

well its fine.. but usually i never have that happen whether its a sad or very depressing story... i guess it was teh music i chose... or maybe it was the story... but still i felt pain either way

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GeneralDurandal [2012-01-02 09:57:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you, so much.

i asked you to make me a shrug pony, you gave me it and so much more.

you didn't have to, but you did.

this means a lot to me, it really dose.


i listened to this [link] while reading.

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Tempestwulf In reply to GeneralDurandal [2012-01-02 10:03:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it man and I got real enjoyment out of making it. I liked Goldaina character and the story behind her, wanted to make it something very special.

And yea, seriously was full of tears writing the description lol Back to normal now.

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GeneralDurandal In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-02 10:19:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

that is easier for some...

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XxRikujoMaramexX [2012-01-02 09:37:42 +0000 UTC]

s...so sad..

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Tempestwulf In reply to XxRikujoMaramexX [2012-01-02 09:39:26 +0000 UTC]

You should've seen me writing that, I was almost crying

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XxRikujoMaramexX In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-02 09:41:19 +0000 UTC]

well thanks for still having the strength to post this...

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Tempestwulf In reply to XxRikujoMaramexX [2012-01-02 09:46:04 +0000 UTC]

*is on floor an emotional wreck* BWAHAAAHAAAA. lol

Np, it's one of my fav shrugs actually.

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Mereneth In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-11 02:18:50 +0000 UTC]

Getting emotionally into writing can really strengthen the results.

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XxRikujoMaramexX In reply to Tempestwulf [2012-01-02 09:47:59 +0000 UTC]

well as long as you're still staying strong that's all that matters ^^

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