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Published: 2014-01-14 19:44:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 20827; Favourites: 315; Downloads: 748
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First picture from ALA is here and I think its going to be one of my favorites. I had so much fun wearing this costume and our group was amazing! So much vinyl..Chie: Β
Yukiko: Crystalikes @ Facebook
Rise: Linz Bee Cosplay @ Facebook
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(You can see more photos + Progress shots at my facebook: www.facebook.com/Tenleid)
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Those are awesome costumes...there really ought to be a Persona 4 team competing in Japan's Super GT series.
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I'm not familiar with these alternate costumes. Are they from Persona 4 Golden?
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These are actually based off of some older fanart that was done back when Persona 4 was originally released!Β
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Oh, cool! I didn't know that. *P4 knowledge is lame, despite that I consider myself a fan*
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Oh that car is hot....don't get me wrong, you guys look hot in the pic too!
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I like the Cosplays, but the car fan in me is more interested in the car.
Because of the body kit I can't place the make
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I believe it's an RX-8.
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My first thought was a Mazda. I was totally off based with it being customed, pathetic me. I should just stick to Formula One!
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You're all very beautiful but I wish I could see your toes, with the big boots I cannot see your beautiful feet and I wish I could see them because I think they are probably very nice and sweaty...I mean lovely
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i actually screencapped this comment before i noticed the username.. god damn it
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Girl inΒ red - Great pose! Great colors well done!
Girl in Green - Awesome! rockin shoes!
Girl in pink - GOOD LORD wow - could ur shorts be any tighter? I DO NOT THINK SO!
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Her shorts used to be 2 inches tighter, she had to remake them because it kept her from breathing
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The neon. The cars. The costumes. The ladies...all beautiful
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very nice outfits. I love the black-Pink Β one. Congrats.
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You three look wonderful! 
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I appreciate the compliment, but I do think you should keep stuff like that to yourself. It's pretty rude to leave a comment on someone elses work saying they're "not youre type" - None of us spent so many hours on our costumes in hope that they'd be your type.Β
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You won't reply to my long post ?
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I am not rude 
Ok,moving on, I just stated my opinion about the perspective ! Not the trio's beauty !
I just think the framing of this picture is a little bit off...on Rise's face - proportions...
OF COURSE YOU KNOW BETTER ,because you are a good photographer,and I respect that, and I am not a damn photographer,so who am I to talk right ?
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Well...all I can ask is not to block me in return...
I am looking forward to her cosplay as Luna from VRL.
Checked the facebook pages and they are impressive.
I just think the perspective on Rise's face/ framing in this picture is a bit off.
Reply...I am listening.
Don't call me a hypocrite...
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"You're a jerk."
^see how that doesn't help at all? It just throws out a negative term based on personal opinion without providing concrete explanations or the constructive criticism necessary for improvement.
"You're a jerk because "not my type" is in context both a negative statement and one that offers nothing for the artist to improve with."
^see, this is better, because it gives a specific *reason* for the negative statement, it explains what, in my opinion, you did wrong. However, it still doesn't offer a suggestion for what to do right.
"You're a jerk because you're being negative and not offering anything constructive. You should, instead, say something like "this character seems out of focus" or "In the ref images I've seen the costume piece is a much deeper red.""
^this is much better, and also the absolute minimum you need in a response to not be labeled a whiny, know-nothing troll. The problem is that it's still got a tone of arrogance and has the sort of statements that might be valuable in a critique response but are not really appropriate for the sort of casual attitude in dA comments.
"You should maybe consider phrasing your objections concretely and offering suggestions for improvement. What you've said so far comes across quite harshly."
^this is pretty good; it offers a concrete description, a suggestion for improvement, and it neither implies you suffer a lack of moral character nor purposefully attempted to hurt anyone's feelings.
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^this is one of two ideal options; if the artist hasn't requested feedback/criticism and you're neither their friend nor recognizably superior in technique and asked for tips all the time, it's both more constructive and polite to keep your mouth shut.
"Hey pal! Lookin' good, I especially like the use of similarly shiny grades of latex in all three costumes. The framing doesn't play up Rise's face as much as it could, though--what's up with that?"
^the other of two ideal options first assumes that you have a friendly relationship with the artist, then opens with an affirmation of the effort and skill that went into the piece, and concludes with a *question* about the composition. This exhibits humility and friendship as well as an interest in the piece and an opportunity for the artist to explain their piece. It avoids the Dunning-Krueger effect that we're all prone to, where we assume we're experts and offer baseless opinions that make us look like total jackasses to anybody that actually knows what they're doing, while at the same time both points out to the artist that we may disagree with them and allows us to learn if it was done on purpose for reasons we aren't yet aware enough to understand.
Also, tenleid's the Chie cosplayer, Β not the photographer.
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You are right,I should think twice before overreacting
Thanks,man !
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Props to you for self-correcting.
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I look at the picture and all I can hear in my head is squeaking.
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Haha im glad you like it~!
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