copperarabian [2008-10-08 05:07:16 +0000 UTC]
"say something" ""Me
**Brooke "
*whats going on, are you having problems*
*I had a dream with red alert, weird and all about him and cute... kinda a story..*
Forbidden to do his job as security director, so he got a job at a gun shop that sold guns, three workers already owner old named auto, roughly 40 southern women named Samantha, conservative college student named Jasen, auto older guy.. Nothing really happen but time passed, and he grew to care for them, even though Jasen dissolved because they didn't have marriage. They sold guns to some peaple, then the owner Auto died cause he was old, red alert was sad. and Samantha inherited it, police wanted to shut it down cause a kid bought a gun and was under age and shot a bunch of peaple at school.
.. it was cute... Ya
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Cheysuli-Night [2008-10-06 01:08:34 +0000 UTC]
*giggles* This is cute. Though at first I thought it was a poster. May I suggest adding a few short diagonal streaks to show that it's glass? Like this [link] Or a window frame.
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TenorSaxLolita In reply to Cheysuli-Night [2008-10-06 02:56:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your input. I'll keep that in mind next time I do water. (I haven't coloured water since I was like 5 and working with giant Crayola crayons!)
Though I had wanted it to appear cartoonish. You're right, though, it doesn't look like a glass window...
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