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Tenshiryuu — The Last Guardian 4
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Rise of the Guardians (c) Dreamworks
Guardians of Childhood (c) William Joyce
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These are drawn really well. I'd love to see these finished.
Nice to know that I'm not the only one who felt bad for Pitch towards the end of the movie.
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You can do it! Do it for Jack. Or Pitch. Or both!
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I BELIEVE IN YOU!! YOU CAN FINISH THE COMIC, I KNOW YOU CAN!! *cheers you on* X3
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Maybe Jack has helped to save Pitch from darkness? He seems to be awaiting for Pitch there.
Besides, in the movie there were many moments we could notice that Jack felt sorry for Pitch.
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Perhaps... This is actually a comic version of a fic that I wrote, so the story is already completed. I really loved their interaction in the movie, and wanted more. If you are interested, the fic is in the gallery, in the folder "The Last Guardian"! I shall try to get back to the comic version soon though.
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I already read it, and it was amazing! 
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sweet zombie jesus, PLEASE tell me youll try to do the entire story.
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"Try" is the operative word. I really want to, it's a matter of motivation/work/life allowing me to. I'm not really used to making comics. I at least want to get the first chapter done, though! We shall see!
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*crosses fingers* I really love how you draw Pitch. his body language is awesome.
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Adoreable looking pitch right there ^^
I think your BG looks great :3
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I think your background looks good, I have never been able to them as good as this even myself.
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For Jack's facial features, I think you caught it pretty close in your 'Even in Darkness' comic.
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I think Jack looks a lot better this time. Maybe you should try making his face rounder and softer, he IS a kid, after all and his present face structure looks a bit old for his eyes. Does that make sense?
Your comic structure is still brilliant! You get a lot of information across with as little space as possible. I have trouble with that and would end up with multiple pages for your one.
I liked the 'walked-through' effect you pulled off in the second panel. It was a little hard to notice at first, I'm curious to see how much better it'll look by the time you reach the part where Jack walks through him.
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Thanks! Yeah, I re-drew this one a few times too. He looks good on my practice sketches then I try and do the actual comic and suddenly it's not happening. I have several refs for Jack, and depending on how he holds his head he can actually be really angular. Also I have more trouble with rounded shapes. I know he's based on a hexagon. But yes, I may try rounding him out a bit more. Dammit Jack why are you so difficult...
Practicepracticepracticeblaaaaaaaaah.
Yeah, condensing things can be difficult. I do a bunch of little thumbnails first. You really have to figure out which info is necessary. A picture's worth a thousand words, right?
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Hm...if that's the case have you tried the use of tracing paper to move a good sketch to your comic page? It's where you trace over the good picture, flip it over and trace it again on the other side, then flip it right-side up again and then trace it for a third time on your comic page. The end result will be a faint version of the good sketch, which you can darken in and ta-da!
Oh yeah, especially when referring to a story-turned comic!
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I am fortunate enough to have a light box. Unfortunately, the good ones are way smaller than the finished product. --____-- I'll figure it out eventually (so I tell myself). I think the main reason is that I just haven't drawn him enough yet. Pitch I've (obviously) drawn a bajillion times.
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The method I mentioned doesn't need a light box, just a decent light source above you, but that's needed for most drawings.
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Pitch's eyes are also better this time. I think you caught the actual shade of silver-gray! And do I detect a faint gold halo around his pupil?
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