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xroyxfirex [2012-12-16 20:50:39 +0000 UTC]
love the colors and the character design
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Tentakustar In reply to KoreeluStromboli [2012-12-18 02:54:29 +0000 UTC]
yeah actually I think a trailer would work out pretty awesome!^^ and thank you for your support as well! I'm pleased!^^
thank you for the compliment as well!^^
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SharkBoot [2012-12-16 00:44:04 +0000 UTC]
Man i hope you're really working hard on this, it seems like it!
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EFBailey [2012-12-15 14:38:33 +0000 UTC]
I really like the layout for this one. There are a couple of things that stand out to my eyes, though, which might need your attention:
For one thing, you make use of a white outline to unify the lower characters and make them stand out a bit more, which is great, but up above it looks as though you had just started to do so before moving on to something else. It makes things feel unfinished - and, since the white outline is a unifying factor, really stands out to me.
Secondly, there's the matter of the orange zigzag on Three Eyes McConehead's chestplate, which just cuts off halfway across. I don't know whether you intended it to be a symmetrical thing or if my eyes are just being fooled by the lack of a black closing line on the right side.
There are also the matters of the blue glowing fist and the punch wave on the logo. I can sort of see what you were going for with the first one, but there are areas where the lines just don't seem to fit - almost as though you rushed through it. And the punch wave is lacking an outline, which makes it stand out distinct from the rest of the logo - everything else is double-outlined in bold, after all.
These are generally small points, but they make things feel a little bit unfinished - like maybe you were planning to go back to them before you finalized, but it slipped your mind.
Otherwise, this is an excellent promotional piece - displaying a variety of characters, all with highly original design, and a solid choice of colors as we've come to expect from your work. I especially like the layout, which draws the eye upward and around to all of the characters without seeming forced.
As for your questions on marketing, I really don't have much experience with that either. I'm not the self-promoting type, which is a big part of why I have no viewers (well, that, and I work slowly). However, I can tell you that this mysterious 'press' is just the collection of journalists, news sites, and game reviewers who might have an interest in a game like this. I would recommend holding off on sending them anything, though, until you have a working model you can display screenshots and video footage from, since a lot of them refuse to talk about a game they haven't seen much evidence of yet. It'd be even better if you could show them a playable demo, so they could give feedback on how the game plays as you develop it - that might help you to turn out a higher-quality product early on.
Until then, just keep doing what you're doing - promoting it through art and letting people know what you're working on. When you have a demo of some sort, you should also let your fans have a look at it so they can give you feedback as well - all to help the final product turn out a little stronger.
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Tentakustar In reply to EFBailey [2012-12-18 02:49:28 +0000 UTC]
Mr.bailey thank you so much! man, I feel like you always know what to say! it's really inspiring!^^
I'm really glad I've come across you! you're just really helpful!^^
I will continue to work hard on m game by using some of your advices!
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EFBailey In reply to Tentakustar [2012-12-18 02:57:25 +0000 UTC]
No problem; after all, interacting with other artists is the whole point of this site, am I right?
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RZSTUDIO [2012-12-15 06:47:18 +0000 UTC]
blargh I don't understand, this pic needs more favs then 6 DX. (Damn these typical anime drawers who get over 1,000 faves a day DX *shot*)
No seriously, this is really nicely done. Very different and unique like always
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Tentakustar In reply to RZSTUDIO [2012-12-18 02:46:49 +0000 UTC]
haha it's all better now I think... lol!
but thank you so much I'm honored!;____;
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StudioNanago [2012-12-15 06:27:47 +0000 UTC]
woaaah it's like Mega Man art!
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Tentakustar In reply to StudioNanago [2012-12-18 02:45:23 +0000 UTC]
haha thank yoou! Megaman's actually one of my inspirations!^^
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Ben-Keen [2012-12-15 06:08:20 +0000 UTC]
Looks great!
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Rakugaki-otoko [2012-12-15 05:58:26 +0000 UTC]
Once again I like your character designs and color choices.
Hmm... the guy in the background with the three eyes reminds me of a certain Zelda antagonist. Is that a coincidence, or inspired by him?
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Rakugaki-otoko In reply to Tentakustar [2012-12-18 04:55:14 +0000 UTC]
oh no, I wasnt talking about Zant from TP, I was talking about this character here from Oracle of Seasons: [link]
Looking at him, he looks like something you would have designed, actually.
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