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Published: 2010-03-08 10:49:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 2148; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 26
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Description "Shit, I'm going to be late again!"

The thought materialized itself as Noa took the stairs by two, making it onto the crowded platform just as the train pulled in. There was no way he was going to make it in-- the train was already packed and there didn't seem to be anyone getting off at this stop.

That's what he hated about living in the middle of the city. The people were everywhere, crammed between alleys or crawling like mice beneath the floor. When they weren't jostling each other around in suspicious places, they were doing it in broad daylight as they were doing to him now. A sizable man-lady shoved him aside, her brand name bag digging painfully into his side. Just as Noa managed to regain his balance a little, someone nearly ran him over with a stroller.

Stumbling a few more paces the boy sighed, trying to remember what his brother had said last week.

Something about... Patience. Or something. Whatever, it didn't matter-- he was going to be late again and he wasn't sure he could keep his perfect grades anymore. There was only so much torture a teacher can take before they die, you know. Then he'd have to go through the hassle of convincing the new teacher that he was a good kid.

Snapping the headphone plug out of his music player, the redhead unwrapped the line from inside his bag. The wire was custom made, extending more than several football fields and stronger than fishing wire; perfect for strangling a crowd of people simultaneously. He'd probably use his CDs too-- after all, he had spent the entire week sharpening the edges. If he was going to be grounded for killing people again, Noa figured he should at least get to try out his new toy.




The train was empty now, but shit he was still going to be late.

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LMFAO THIS IS SO DUMB MAN, I FEEL SORRY FOR ANYONE WHO ACTUALLY READ MY SHITTY WRITING AHAHAHA. I haven't written anything in so long.



Okay yeah. e ue Noa~~ For an unmade group. He's a serial killer schoolboy.

I don't know why there's so much blood in my deviations lately. I'M NOT A PSCYHOPATH, I SWEAR. And I actually don't like guro. e ne

Took out the dead bodies cause it cluttered up the image-- but I should have kept them in to hide the embarrassing perspective AHAHAHAH.
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Comments: 20

Absolute-Sero [2010-03-12 02:04:40 +0000 UTC]

At first this image just grabbed my attention whilst browsing, but then I read the writing and liked it even more. <3
MUAHAHAHAH.

Some days I think I wish I could do this on a busy bus (since no trains/subways run here). @_@

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Coconut-Thief [2010-03-10 19:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Suuuu sexy. Your coloring is amazuuun~ Love the blood.

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gachapin [2010-03-10 11:27:04 +0000 UTC]

He looks gorgeous.. I love the way you colored the hair.

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blueskiesdefy [2010-03-10 05:05:57 +0000 UTC]

I actually happen to like your writing. You don't give yourself enough credit. I'd love to read more! And your characters are so interesting- are you planning to write or novel or something? It certainly seems so~

This is Kira/Jenny btw. : )

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KumoriNinja08 [2010-03-09 07:14:49 +0000 UTC]

<333 ouo *eagerly awaits to see DEATH BY CD'S*

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DM9Rei [2010-03-09 03:50:10 +0000 UTC]

It's too bad he's a killer, he's rather hot =o

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Katarya [2010-03-09 03:29:10 +0000 UTC]

oh maaaan...if only i had a way to get rid of all those annoying people like him...aahhhh life would be sweet...
LOL JKS. I LUB THIS. ; W ; AND THE BLOOD IS SO EPIC.

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xxjust-a-nobodyxx [2010-03-08 22:10:48 +0000 UTC]

Killer CDS! so much blooddd!

I still like it thought! great job!

Remind me never to get near this guy on a train... or anywhere for that matter... ;v;

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Gelmisar [2010-03-08 20:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha... love the 'flavor text' -as we D&D nerds call it. A good short story is always fun with these sort of deviations!

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steam-doll [2010-03-08 20:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Ffff what shitty writing? I SEE NO SHITTY WRITING, ONLY PARAGRAPHS OF WIN Q_Q

Noa's really cute in the most disturbing way possible. XD

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VerminLace [2010-03-08 20:25:05 +0000 UTC]

It's still nice! xD And I liked your writing. lmfao <3

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kit-tai [2010-03-08 19:34:58 +0000 UTC]

dsg..he's..so hot omg do want XD
his pose expression everything is perfect and i really love the coloring those blood stains *o* omg the bg is amazing as well really lovely pic

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ChiharuPon [2010-03-08 18:24:23 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFFFF HAWT<3

God, you're freaking magnificent.
The blood, the lighting, the BOY. FFFFF DO WANT<33

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Rainbow-Mist-Topaz [2010-03-08 15:58:23 +0000 UTC]

Rainbow-Mist-Topaz is no longer able to comment on this picture due to being strangulated. However, she would have liked to have said that this is undeniably awesome.

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Rainbow-Mist-Topaz [2010-03-08 15:54:57 +0000 UTC]

Hoshi-

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WikiME [2010-03-08 15:05:18 +0000 UTC]

love the blood~<33 get perfect marks on everything eh boy~ ?

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Wanted-x [2010-03-08 12:12:32 +0000 UTC]

i liek~

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ChiNoMiko [2010-03-08 11:33:47 +0000 UTC]

bloood *u*

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Ria-Starlin [2010-03-08 10:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Gaaah I liked the story!
You can write FAIRYTALES!!!

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Taversia [2010-03-08 10:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow... The bloodstains all over the place really make this picture. They're so well done! I also really like his pose.

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