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Published: 2010-02-11 14:39:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1163; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 16
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Description Never let it - never let it go .. Don't let go of the things you believe in, don't let go of this moment in time, don't let go of things that you're feeling .. Don't let go ..



You give me something that I can believe in, I can't explain the things that I'm feeling, you get my senses running wild I can't resist your sweet, sweet smile, so take this feeling and make it grow ... No, I wont let go...

you, A.
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WorldWar-Tori [2010-08-27 16:24:14 +0000 UTC]

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I love lilacs, they're such pretty flowers. I really like the shade you shot too (this one is actually my favorite). It's very pretty.

I do have a few suggestions. First, I think they could be a little sharper with more detail. Maybe if you focused on one flower instead of a group of them, they would look a little more focused and detailed.

Also, out of focus ones on the right are more of a distraction than a help. Maybe if you moved your camera to the left, you could have focused on one or two catching a more powerful shot.

Another thing is, the ones that are your subject, are all cut off in places. Let it be from the crop or something else in their way. I think if you had a full flower as the subject of the piece, it would be a little easier to catch. Though I see what you are taking the photo of and what the subject is, my eye moves a little to figure out which one exactly.

Other than those few things I really like the color, like I said. I like the contrast of the darker background, it really makes these ones stand out quite nicely. Also, the number of them you have in the background is nice too, since they aren't 'single' flowers. The lighting is also quite nice. It highlights the flowers perfectly without over exposing any parts. Nice work (=

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((( please do not pay attention to the stars, the critique is in what I wrote

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terriblyWrong In reply to WorldWar-Tori [2010-08-29 09:15:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the advice, it means a lot even when I am not so good at photography and I am still learning how to take nice shots.
I appreciate a lot that you gave a critique to this photo(in fact is the firs critique I ever received) and I hope I am going to improve my works.
Again, many thankies!

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WorldWar-Tori In reply to terriblyWrong [2010-08-29 15:47:06 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

it takes practice , I am not that good either

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abe702 [2011-02-11 11:16:51 +0000 UTC]

very good focus and nice details against a backdrop of lovely bokeh

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terriblyWrong In reply to abe702 [2011-02-11 19:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

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Gemdrop [2010-07-19 10:53:51 +0000 UTC]

love the colours

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terriblyWrong In reply to Gemdrop [2010-07-19 11:22:30 +0000 UTC]

I love them too, thank you for the !

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Roxy805 [2010-02-12 04:58:58 +0000 UTC]

Nice
And nice message too

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terriblyWrong In reply to Roxy805 [2010-02-12 08:36:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, thanks

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Roxy805 In reply to terriblyWrong [2010-02-13 10:20:45 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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