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WorldWar-Tori [2010-08-27 16:24:14 +0000 UTC]
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I love lilacs, they're such pretty flowers. I really like the shade you shot too (this one is actually my favorite). It's very pretty.
I do have a few suggestions. First, I think they could be a little sharper with more detail. Maybe if you focused on one flower instead of a group of them, they would look a little more focused and detailed.
Also, out of focus ones on the right are more of a distraction than a help. Maybe if you moved your camera to the left, you could have focused on one or two catching a more powerful shot.
Another thing is, the ones that are your subject, are all cut off in places. Let it be from the crop or something else in their way. I think if you had a full flower as the subject of the piece, it would be a little easier to catch. Though I see what you are taking the photo of and what the subject is, my eye moves a little to figure out which one exactly.
Other than those few things I really like the color, like I said. I like the contrast of the darker background, it really makes these ones stand out quite nicely. Also, the number of them you have in the background is nice too, since they aren't 'single' flowers. The lighting is also quite nice. It highlights the flowers perfectly without over exposing any parts. Nice work (=
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TORi
((( please do not pay attention to the stars, the critique is in what I wrote
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