Rambojoe446 [2016-06-10 03:32:19 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I just have to say wow. I really enjoyed the read a a whole, but the thing that clenched it for me was your use of details. Everything seemed so fleshed out that I was able to fully immerse myself in the story, from the characters to the environments, I was very impressed. Not to mention that it flowed smoothly as well. Can't tell you how many times that I will read short stories like this that have a great premise, but then fall flat since they can't connect and flow smoothly.
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Rambojoe446 In reply to Tesla51 [2016-06-10 03:39:00 +0000 UTC]
Not a problem man, I really enjoyed it. The details are probably the biggest thing that I look for, which you satisfied perfectly.
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