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Published: 2011-02-28 04:50:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 352; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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Description *^* I fail at beginnings so bad. I never start the begining of stories they're always too horriable. Somehow I get the feeling that I'm moving through this too quickly. And also I made a lot of mistakes, but I'm not going to tell you what they are because hopefully you won't notice them! D8 Except I will admit that the lines toward the speech bubbles suck like no other mother. I forgot to do them.....

And.... I was just going to do the background for the title and the first story panel, but I got carried away..... woops. Well, tell me what you think so I know whether I can get carried away again or I should never ever ever ever do it again because it's just so horrible that a puppy just died because of it okay?

On the third to last pannel, I know it isn't clear, so I'm going to clarify to you. Vermello is booting Spence in the stomach... eh...

The dude there that is all pissy is Vermello. Spence is his companion.

If there is anything that you see that can be fixed please tell me! D8 I want to get better!

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Comments: 13

Shen548 [2011-07-16 15:07:38 +0000 UTC]

your doing good in the oct so dont be so hard on yourself

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Beastgods [2011-05-06 00:04:37 +0000 UTC]

What is all this? U: Tell me moar.

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TETRAtheFROG In reply to Beastgods [2011-05-06 00:32:02 +0000 UTC]

It's my audition for the OCT . :{) And I made it in too!

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ebonypen [2011-04-05 00:14:07 +0000 UTC]

by faving this, I fav the whole comic

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TETRAtheFROG In reply to ebonypen [2011-04-05 02:24:06 +0000 UTC]

:{P You can't fool me, I know it's cheesy and unclear! But thank you for faving, not just part of it, but the whole of it!

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ebonypen [2011-02-28 22:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Don't be so hard on yourself I like it! There's already personality: Vermello is the sort to go get things done regardless of what anyone says, and Spence is a dunce enough to call her mom horrible on top of her dad, (unless she agrees with him...)

Good luck with the audition

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MousieDoodles [2011-02-28 05:21:55 +0000 UTC]

You were right! The b+w people and the colored bgs look really cool!
And I don't think the beginning's too bad. You just gotta fill out the story later is the trick.

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TETRAtheFROG In reply to MousieDoodles [2011-02-28 05:23:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you on your feedback. Maybe I'll keep this way of coloring in mind....

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MousieDoodles In reply to TETRAtheFROG [2011-02-28 05:25:01 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!
Well it looks cool! But maybe you'll just come up with something cooler!

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TETRAtheFROG In reply to MousieDoodles [2011-02-28 05:36:12 +0000 UTC]

I hope I do~ I could do this if the background was really complicated. 8v

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MagnaIcona [2011-02-28 05:04:59 +0000 UTC]

i bet i suck at beginnings more, i think its fine.
horrible is spelled wrong in panel 2 btw

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TETRAtheFROG In reply to MagnaIcona [2011-02-28 05:10:37 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaah that word! *M* I'm going to fix that! Thank you!

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MagnaIcona In reply to TETRAtheFROG [2011-02-28 05:12:41 +0000 UTC]

no problem *nods*

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