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ramendangosenbei [2015-02-08 09:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwww and pfft..mumsy
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xXDodem-DemonicXx [2014-01-13 16:29:27 +0000 UTC]
Ah..I love fanfics like this, gosh..they're so hard to find in my opinion oAo" Great fic! <3
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Siveryyao [2013-04-29 17:24:26 +0000 UTC]
QWQ!I really love this
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Unspoken-Tales [2013-04-28 01:46:57 +0000 UTC]
It's was okay but with time and practice I know that you can not only improve but blow everyone away. Your plot line was good but with your permission I would like to critic a few things and lend you a hand to give this piece a little more substance and a realistic view. I am in no way saying that eating disorders are not a part of everyday life for some people but the way it’s handled/viewed by both genders does vary greatly. Again, I liked your plot line and where it was heading but it could use a bit of work and I would be more than happy to help you out on the things that popped out to me.
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Unspoken-Tales In reply to ThatNekohacker [2013-04-28 02:37:37 +0000 UTC]
No problem. For the notes though, the second line of the story makes no sense (I think it was just a miss typed line), there is an unneeded comma in the title, and instead of an eating disorder he would, due to what males in real life do and his personality, not necessarily cry over his weight but instead he would trap himself in some type of exercise room and do some extreme exercising that could borderline as an unhealthy obsession. His body type would come from, like you said, heroes. Aiming to be more cut, ripped, jacked, and over all just as good looking and strong as they are.
Again great plot, great getting to where you wanted it to go, and I can't wait for your next piece to this work if you decide to go through it. :3
On another non writing note, thank you for the llama and watch. I've sent a llama in return and I will add you to my watch since I would love to see how you progress in writing.
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Yukina-Tenma [2013-04-28 01:29:25 +0000 UTC]
Aww it's sooo fwuffy I wanna squeal for a long time~!
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ThatNekohacker In reply to Yukina-Tenma [2013-04-28 01:54:42 +0000 UTC]
XD Really? Fluff is not my best category
But thank you so much for that kind comment Izzy-chan
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Mitchie98 [2013-04-28 01:08:26 +0000 UTC]
THAT WAS SWEET AS SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!
SO KAWAII!!!!!!
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Mitchie98 In reply to ThatNekohacker [2013-04-28 01:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Yes. VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY GOOD.
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LordMuffinX3 [2013-04-28 00:22:15 +0000 UTC]
I see France o-o
I JUST GOT A IGGY PLUSH AND A RUSSIA PILLOW FUKYEAHBICH
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ThatNekohacker In reply to LordMuffinX3 [2013-04-28 00:25:08 +0000 UTC]
Yes oh dat France
Hahaha nice.......wait Russia pillow? I'm like so jelly - 3 -
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LordMuffinX3 In reply to ThatNekohacker [2013-04-28 00:28:53 +0000 UTC]
XD Yup oUo
If I had a acutally decent house and a WORKING camera, I would post it ono
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TheEvilFishImp In reply to ThatNekohacker [2013-04-28 14:44:44 +0000 UTC]
Aa, yeah i read that you wanted to try that.
And I think you are wonderful at writing such things!
-3- I fail at it mostly.
my humor gets in the way, and I tend to make one or the other ruin the moment with a stupid/or rude comment
But you are very welcome Neko sama!
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DaPencilNinja [2013-04-27 19:27:05 +0000 UTC]
England's mumsy 8D
Lol did you get the diamonds in the sky thing from the song xD
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NoraNecko [2013-04-27 19:18:12 +0000 UTC]
It's just so cuuuuuuuute ~~~ *Q*
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CloneAce [2013-04-27 19:04:15 +0000 UTC]
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