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Thavisah — A Path to StarClan

Published: 2010-03-17 22:52:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1016; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 18
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Description His head pounding with blood flooding his eyes, Falconmoon, pounced on the RiverClan warrior closest to him, sinking his claws deep into the warrior's flank.
"This is what you get for invading our camp!" Falconmoon hissed.
The Riverclan warrior snarled back; with a powerful push, it launched Falconmoon into the air with it's hind legs, and sneered as the dark brown tom landed on the hard ground with a thud.
"Weakling," the RiverClan tom sneered.
Falconmoon could not reply back. He felt his life sweeping away from him as the world faded to black.
Warriors of WindClan... Falconmoons thoughts slirred inside his head, Fight well...

The sky was speckled with dark, green mixing in with deep blue. With starlight bouncing at his paws, Falconmoon headed into the sky, his tail flicking. He turned his head to glance back at his clan camp, with was full of his injured clanmates and blood. His eyes flickered like stars as he turned his head back round and padded away into the depths of the sky to Starclan.

Sorry this isn't my best writing, I'm kinda writing in a hurry. Hope you like it! Made it out of complete spraycan in MS Paint!

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Comments: 11

Coyotester [2010-04-23 01:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Really amazing job! <33 Love how you did the sky!

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Thavisah In reply to Coyotester [2010-05-07 22:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! Took a lot of effort and time to do it though...

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Coyotester In reply to Thavisah [2010-05-10 21:40:02 +0000 UTC]

It sure looks like it <33!

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RoseFox101 [2010-03-26 23:20:43 +0000 UTC]

u has moved me enough 2 write a poem maybe. *clears throught like umbridge*
the clear cat
looks down with
wise eyes

you can totally
see right
through him
cuz hez dead.

omg,
a gost cat.

yay! that was posibly the stupidist poem ever! xD

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Thavisah In reply to RoseFox101 [2010-03-31 22:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Ha, that's awesome. xD

The way you wrote thiz:

you can totally see right through him cuz he's dead sounds so... like you don't care

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RoseFox101 In reply to Thavisah [2010-11-24 04:54:39 +0000 UTC]

i care very muchly! i'm just crazy.
cuz he's dead.

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Pathys-Soul [2010-03-17 23:01:40 +0000 UTC]

Dude, you're a fan of Warriors also? We seriously need to catch up. Like, seriously.

Why did Falconmoon hafta die? D:

Awesome use of the spray can in MS Paint!

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Thavisah In reply to Pathys-Soul [2010-03-19 22:42:47 +0000 UTC]

I love the Warriors Series! I've read all the books that are available right now!

Falconmoon had to die, because it was "his time" to arrive in StarClan. =0

Thanks!

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Pathys-Soul In reply to Thavisah [2010-03-20 00:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Baw! Lucky you! I haven't been reading the Warrior's series since the Power of Three or something like that. I think I've only read the first and maybe the second book of that series. Truthfully, I was greatly disappointed when the author(s) decided to make Bramblepaw/claw the main character. :/ It was such a huge jump from Firestar to Bramblepaw/claw. I want to reread the WHOLE thing though. Maybe sometime in the future when I has more money.

Poor Falconmoon. D: Will he be reincarnated into a great warrior in the future? :3

You're welcome.

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Thavisah In reply to Pathys-Soul [2010-03-31 22:26:08 +0000 UTC]

You don't have to buy the series. You can order them at the library can't you? That's what I do.

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Pathys-Soul In reply to Thavisah [2010-04-01 21:21:09 +0000 UTC]

True, but every time I browse for the Warrior Series, it's always checked out. D: Oh teh disapoint.

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