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Published: 2009-04-14 08:37:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 667; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 3
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Location: Lakeside forest in University of Indonesiamy favorite place to get my brain refreshed after hard studies in class. also a place to search some inspiration. this is the only place in the whole university where stays cool even if the temperature is so hot. a great place to get your heart warmed.
currently on the contest [link]
~give me your beat boys and free my soul, I wanna get lost in your rock and roll and drift away..
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ahh youuu
[that means thanks a lot]
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Very vibrant colours! Not bad at all
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thank you very much. glad you like it
okay, i'll try to avoid some distracting objects next time
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Wow there. Thanks for the watch!
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The first thing that struck me in this photo was the amazing lighting.
Though there are things that you can improve. There are too many black colours, but the whites are also too high and causing over exposure.
If you don't know what I'm talking about, you'll need to look it up on google and generally get to grips with the technicallity of photography.
Lastly, the rubbish in the foreground spoils it completely, remove objects like this in future and you'll have a better photo.
Hope this helps.
Critique courtesy of *devCRIT
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thank you for your time and your words. sure i'll try to improve that
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reminds me of robert frost's 'The Road Not Taken'...nice.
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really? you make me so curious, could you give the link to that photo?
thank you anyway
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nah, it aint a photo. R.Frost is one of my fave poets. The Road Not Taken is one of his brilliant pieces.
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ooow, sorry i didn't know that
thanks for your info
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