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Published: 2012-02-06 00:52:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 295; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Her is my Solas in anthropic form and AralynnDrawing done in graphite
Painting finish work and filters done in PicsArt
Comments welcome
After my critique I went in and attempted adjusting aralynn the line art can be found here [link] the painted version will be up as soon as it is done
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Anatomy: On the woman's left hand her fingers are a tad long, and her thumb is too short. The pose of her arm is also off, the way it is either her left upper arm is very short or the forearm is deformed. If you draw one slight curve down the center of her face, you will notice that you have four different perspectives in the lady's face, one in the mouth/chin are, one in her jaw, another in her nose/far eye, and another in her closest eye
Design: The Werewolf's eyes should probably be a more intense yellow to match the luminescence of the woman's eye.
Lighting: Firelight, on a dark night, makes very dramatic shadows which we partially see in the werewolf but not on the woman.
The FEEL of the picture is great. You nailed it, and that can be one of the hardest things to do. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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I have just started painting some of my charachters digitally and I'm still working on the proportions and perspective part my art professor when I was in school said I see showos and such well for some reason no matter how hard I try some little thing is off I can get the hand perfect then have issues with my faces or I get the face looking awsome and something else looks a bit off or one charachter awsome but it don't want to work right on the other I have the clean original drawing I'll attempt to work on it. I really appreciate your critique practice makes perfect and it's hard to figure things out if no one points them out to you
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Sorry for spelling errors my keys aren't working right. Showows was supposed to be shadows and any other ones thank you I really do appreciate your critique
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I know how thag feels. 
Two things I know can help with the perspective issue is to (1) draw a box around the concept sketch and sketch outside of where the pic actually is, so you can see relationships between limbs. (2) look for actual marks in the human body that help with anatomy, i.e. the elbow always lands at the bottom of the ribcage when someone has their arm down by their side.
(This is a reply to your comment on my critique, it just wouldn't let me reply there because I'm not a premium member. 
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If I look at a photo they come out a little different for some reason when I do them majoritaly from my head they are a bit cartoony but thatk you I'll try that and maybe try repainting them or at least post the fixed original drawing if I can get it figured out. I've done drawings where I don't notice something till the photo I took has been posted. But hey practicing and working on it I eventually have to get it figured out
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Thank you I like improving and it's hard to improve when no one wants to give pointers or comment I'm excited I scored well on everything else. I found some awsome stock photos and fam and friend photos I can use for refence points
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That's the way! Good luck on your artistic journey.
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Thank you the story isn't necisarrily Elder Schrolls related but their one of the few so far that take lycanthrope art and the settings are similar in time anyways not necissarly place I just love the middle ages still working on backgrounds I totally suck at buildings but I can get inspiration from my art hist books I knew there was a reason I kept those lol
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Nice, im really thinkin to do somethin similar! Winterlove!
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Thank you for the complement
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Really? I guess great minds think alike right
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