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Published: 2011-10-16 05:38:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 446; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 9
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First off, Thank you everyone, even if only once, you viewed something of mine, even if you were a complete bastard and bashed my hard(?) work.Secondly, sorry, I got a little lazy with the wings, but they still turned out okay for such an amateur way of doing them.
Third, You so sexy Luna, too bad you are mega whore!
I'm going to start bugging people and see if anyone wants to color this for me.
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This is good work nothing seems out of place or off the wings give her a good look
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Thank you very much--although I feel I did poorly on the females on this particular submission, but it's water under the bridge, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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The legs could use work but it's not that major. I have a woman that for all her do gooding has an appetite for sex. She likes her men young and a bit inexperienced they make up for it in effort
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Yeah, I know about the legs/waist on this one. I was so happy about how the the rest of it turned out that I got overconfident and then rushed to finish it. D:
As for Luna's sexual appetite--she, unlike 'your woman,' is completely impartial to experience, technique or size--she simply enjoys sex, and if it's not for the physical pleasure, it more for the thought of 'conquering another man."
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Wow well I admire your skill
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It has it's flaws (the waist ) but I do believe that too, this was the flag that marked a sudden improvement in my ability.
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What are her colors, if I may ask? I might give it a go.
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Even if you don't end up coloring it, I'm still going to thank you because it's hard to find people who will even consider it!
*ahem* THANK YOU!
Moving on, she's pretty much all black, other than her skin. She's a bit pale, but not sickly or ghostly... her hair is technically a VERY dark blue, but do what you want with it and her eyes are purple/violet. Wings and clothing are black, as mentioned before and again, thank you for even considering doing this.
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Great! I hope you don't mind me faving both versions of it
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It's fine, I don't mind
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Nice, immediately caught my. But I can't help but feel that a little something is off...
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It's the waist, I did it too small!!!! D:
Just... compare it to her shoulders and you'll be like "the f$*@?1"
It was soooooo good, then I got over-confident D:
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Well, you can relish the fact that the pose is good, the angles were a success and the expression is pretty awesome.
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Thank you for being an optimist for my sake, I try to look at all the good I did with this picture.
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I'm not being an optimist, I'm being honest
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It looks nice, but her head is too large for her body, and the feathers on each wing don't match up. The ones on her left wing (our right) are more rounded than her right wing when you look at it adjusted for perspective. The feathers at the joint of her left wing stick out at crazy angles where they shouldn't too.
Her hips and legs are too small for her shoulders, and while we're on the subject, what's going on at her waist? Are those tailfeathers? Plumage? A random feathery tail?
You have some good skill here, but you let it down by not taking enough care.
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I agree, the head is too big for the body, but I'm drawing anime, not an actual person with wings or anything like that. If you STILL think the head is too big, I suggest you search up some anime picture right now. As for the wings, that's intended, and that is the way wings work actually, when you lower the wing and release the fold on the joint, the wings splay outwards and widen. Also, in the comments, I even said I didn't try that hard on the wings.
As for the body and legs, I'm working on it, and it's true I will always have room for improvement, but also note, I'm not doing any form of realism, I'm doing anime which is to say, often highly inproportionate. (Seriously, check out Lucky Star, their heads should snap of their petite bodies and neck)
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Eh, I'll give you the anime thing, but she still seems a little oddly proportioned considering that. It's probably mostly the shoulders/hips ratio that make her look that way, even anime manages to keep proportion there.
As for the wings, I get that wings splay as they're lowered, but I meant the feathers at the crux of the joint on her left wing. Feathers don't point outwards there.
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"Okay spread that wing... cross that leg... shulder up... Slutty smile... Perfect."
-Cameraman
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Who will Cameraman take a picture of next I wonder.
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Doesn't really narrow it down >.>
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*Sexy whistles* WHOOO! XD dude nice! it's pretty good
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and once I get better, I will take over the world, using sexy anime babes as my distraction!
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