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Crysta-Lynx [2016-07-17 20:52:05 +0000 UTC]
Still getting better I see.
Glad to see you making different poses and backgrounds, I can see your not afraid to push yourself to the limit and try new things where that's concerned. Although, as I like to on all your drawings, I'm going to give you some constructive criticism. Firstly, when you do this pose in the future, try making their back legs a little bigger, they're a little too small compared to the front legs, you also made their ears small, but that could just be your style if you want, I make their ears really big sometimes, that's kinda just my style I think. Honestly I don't think it makes a whole lotta sense to make his wings open in this picture, he doesn't really seem to be doing anything, I recommend you make the background have a little more detail, mostly the moon. I like how you drew Moon Flight's face, Pip's is a little chubby though. Also, have you worked on the personality to Moon Flight? Like his likes, his dislikes, and his flaws?
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The-Double-U In reply to Crysta-Lynx [2016-07-17 21:04:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
I know, Believe me, Moon Flight's Ear needs more work. But I'm going with The Ears I just draw on Other Characters, I think they mostly look fine. So in a way, Other Characters I draw will have ears drawn like that.
I know My Background doesn't have detail, One Day I plan too Draw Something that doesn't focus on The Characters, but rather just a Background.
Also too be honest, Pipsqueak shouldn't Really have a Brown Spot on his Left Eye, but I decided too Add it on there, so he could have More Brown Spots on him.
Well, He is Supposed too be a Good Guy. Moon Flight likes His Friends, Luna, His Parents.
His Dislikes are Mostly his Enemies and Anyone who calls him a Freak.
I don't know about Flaws yet.
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Crysta-Lynx In reply to The-Double-U [2016-07-17 21:08:37 +0000 UTC]
I see, just making sure you make him have flaws, since y,know realistically he would. You are really learning to do good with the faces, but the anatomy needs work, but so does mine, I'm not a perfect artist either y,know. X3
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Pony4Koma [2016-07-16 19:55:55 +0000 UTC]
That is super cute, but I can't help to think about Pazuzu from Futurama. (Sorry)
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Pony4Koma In reply to The-Double-U [2016-07-16 20:06:44 +0000 UTC]
Sorry no youtube clips. The episode is called Teenage Mutant Leela Hurdles if you want to look it up.
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The-Double-U In reply to Pony4Koma [2016-07-16 20:07:29 +0000 UTC]
I think I might have seen it before, but I think it has been a long while.
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GongFujin [2016-07-16 18:54:37 +0000 UTC]
Very nice!
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lexboss [2016-07-16 17:16:20 +0000 UTC]
great job
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SkyeCloud14 [2016-07-16 15:25:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow! This is awesome!
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TBriddle [2016-07-16 14:21:03 +0000 UTC]
Very cute!
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Nomad36 [2016-07-16 13:41:27 +0000 UTC]
They look cute, I bet they have a great brotherly relationship.
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lazu228 [2016-07-16 13:27:24 +0000 UTC]
aww that's so cute
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NeoNimbus526 [2016-07-16 12:59:45 +0000 UTC]
This is very touching.
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