kingofthedededes73 [2014-07-09 21:56:26 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Overall this is a very vivid and beautiful piece. though there are a few things i'd like to say about it, good and bad.
lets start with the good. the design of the character is very complete from head to toe. the small details and the shading is very nice and well made. The background just attracts the eye everywhere and its really awesome.
now to move on, anatomically she's about 6 1/2 heads tall, which is the proper height, though the arms should be about the same length fingertip to fingertip as the height, and they're kinda short. her hair is kinda the weakest point in the draw, especially at the end right after the jewel. Moving onto the legs, the shading on the right leg, the one raised up kinda doesn't have much separation and does not give me the impression that its bent, it looks more like its just one big blob of flesh.... and although the shading is decent, i cannot identify where the light source is. And the last thing i wanted to cover was the toes, namely the big toes, now although the second toes can be longer than the big toe in some people, and even go further than the big, in this case the big toes are somehow smaller than some of the smaller toes, which really isn't anatomically correct, even if it is a minor thing.
All in all, that's all i got to say about this pic, is definitely a wonderful one.
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the-dragoness-DM In reply to kingofthedededes73 [2014-07-10 05:06:27 +0000 UTC]
about the shading on the leg, i already knew it wasn't that good. my boyfriend told me before but i can't seem to make it better, so i took a break from the shading. thanks for the critics, i'm most definitely going to do something with it.
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