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The-Evil-Meh — Equality Between Us
Published: 2009-12-04 05:32:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description I love your body

Every bit and every piece

Inside and out

I want to reach into your heart

And pull it slowly out

I want to wrap my arms around your ribcage

And watch your stomach acid eat my skin

I want to slip my hands into your belly

To hide them from the cold

I want to swallow your tongue

And take back the words you never said

I want to string your guts behind me

And decorate our room in red

Hold you mind in my hands

And finally know just who you are

I want to bathe in your blood

And drink it like you once did wine

I want to take your eyes

And put them in a locket

That I can wear around my neck

So I'll never forget

How you used to look at me

I want to strip your bones of flesh

And make them into my bed

I'll make a blanket of your skin

A pillow of your hair

And sleep the best I've ever slept

I want to hold you in my arms as you die

From the gunshot to your head

You may have taken your own life

(And mine in turn because life

Without you isn't living)

But your body is still mine

And I hope that you'll be watching

When I take that pretty knife

And, buried in your body

End my life-less life
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Comments: 6

Forsight00 [2009-12-05 16:57:14 +0000 UTC]

I like it, it has a caring nature yet...creepy and..gore like too.
I don't think there is any advice to give really.

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wolfforce58 [2009-12-04 07:35:37 +0000 UTC]

O-o; that's so gruesome...I don't know if I should be scared or awed, lol. Very cool, twisted, but still....unique.

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The-Evil-Meh In reply to wolfforce58 [2009-12-05 06:43:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you!

Uh, I'm a little scared myself, personally. This kinda started off with me thinking about Christmas in horror movies, and it kinda escalated from there.

However, twisted-ness aside, see anything that could be improved? Word replacement, grammar errors, dysruptions in the general rythm... Anything

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wolfforce58 In reply to The-Evil-Meh [2009-12-05 06:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Lol, that's different...don't scare yourself!!

And nothing stood out to me in particular...so no errors as far as I can tell, lol.

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The-Evil-Meh In reply to wolfforce58 [2009-12-05 07:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about it, it's good to scare yourself sometimes. It keeps you looking at yourself so you don't forget who you are.

Thanks for looking!

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wolfforce58 In reply to The-Evil-Meh [2009-12-05 07:44:31 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I suppose it can.

You're welcome! ^_^

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