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Lodchen [2016-06-21 15:53:18 +0000 UTC]
Hey
I saw you leaving and in-depth comment on someone else's work and thought I'd return the favor, even though it wasn't my art you commented on
I think her character sounds really well-fitting for a vampire, maybe a little bit cliché, but since she isn't the protagonist of the story I guess you can't go wrong with some clichés Plus, I personally think that flirty & seductive vampires always work really well as characters
On to the design:
I think the long hair goes really well with her being a seductive vampire character (I have a rather similar looking vampire character as well, as long as we keep it to hair and body type), so I like that quite a lot^^
Giving her 3 different forms adds something less cliché and more creative, what I really like. It makes her unique in a way, and not some random vampire chick.
For her 2nd form (I'll call it 'human form'), I think it's nice that you added some sunglasses, because it indicates that she is a character who isn't fond of sunlight, even though she is immune to it in her human form -what leads straight to my next point: I'm not sure if it really makes sense for her to wear sunglasses in her normal form, since she can't stand sunlight in that form anyway, right? So I guess she would be outside only during the night, and then it wouldn't really be necessary to wear sunglasses. Feel free to correct me if I got this wrong!
For the drawing part, I think you did a good job, but if you really want to push your character designs, I'd suggest to study a lot of anatomy. Having a better understanding of anatomy will help you a lot with more convincing designs, since the body is the base on which you add all the closing and hair and stuff
There are some really good (free) resources online to do that. A really good start would be proko on youtube, (or like any other drawing channel that you feel is helpful to you) and there are also some really good websites with nude photos to use as reference (Using reference is so important if you want to improve really fast! With that i don't mean just copying from photos, but actually thinking about why certain things look the way you do while you draw, studying the bones and muscles, etc.
For references, I'd especially recommend artists.pixelovely.com, but there are more that I could send you, if you are interested
I know it's a bit of a lame tip, but it really works wonders, and you basically can never study enough anatomy
I hope my comment was a bit helpful, and I wish you a really nice day!
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The-PBG In reply to Lodchen [2017-03-09 19:09:21 +0000 UTC]
I still like coming back to this comment.
Once again thank you ^^
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Lodchen In reply to The-PBG [2017-10-23 19:51:53 +0000 UTC]
That's good to hear! It's understandable that you are producing less though, I did the same. Getting a bit quicker again nowadays, but still, if one wants to produce high quality, it always takes a lot of time. If you need further aisstance with your studies, I just learned about this online classes by Marc Brunet that sounds really amazing. cubebrush.co/mb/products/mmfwy… I have bought tutorials from him before and always thought they were really good quality, so I'm going to give it a try. The first lesson came online today, and today also is the last day of a huge sale for that class. It's still a lot of money though, I just hought I'd mentiion it since it's on sale right now. However, a good free resource to learn from is sycra on youtube. I haven't watched his recent videos, but his old ones always were really helpful. Istebrak is great as well, even though most of the content there is really repetetive - it's the best place to go for learning to properly paint though, since she focuses a lot on form studies and painting the human face. She hosts free lessons 2times a week, and offers free video critiques to members of the google+ community.
I'm glad my comment still motivates you. Giving good feedback never is easy, all that matters is that you try! I'm sure you're doing a good job!^^
That always is worth a lot^^ I'm happy fpr you you have such good friends!
I don't really have the time to write a full critique for you right now, but I just had a quick look at your gallery, and this one
caught my eye. Since I mentioned Istebrak earlier I thought this video youtu.be/NH6zB0xxWj8 could be helpful to you
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The-PBG In reply to Lodchen [2016-06-21 21:21:47 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god you have made me so happy!
I do love in-depth comments and what you have done for me is so lovely and I am deeply touched
I do agree she does cross some clichés, but I am glad you can tell they are only minor, I always try to base my characters on establishes tropes as to give them a solid grounding and archetype, but I never try to let it define them. Also thanks for the compliment on the three forms, I would like to say that's original but I saw it somewhere a long time ago... but my memory escapes me where that was.
Also in the universe she is based in Vampires can go out in daylight but its extremely uncomfortable and severely weakens them, however it affects stronger vampires (like her) less so. Also she is a fashion victim so that's one other reasons she would wear sunglasses
And you are right I should do character anatomy, and I will take a look. But then again I do not want to be constrained by a very photo realistic design, I like cartoony and exaggerated (if we subtle details). But at times I have used reference art to help my drawing, but you are right I need to step it up to the next level. Still clothing remains a difficult thing at time and my hair is sometimes hit or miss.
However I AM SO HAPPY YOU COMMENTED, I AM SO TOUCHED YOU TOOK NOTE OF MY COMMENT, AND YOUR ART IS BEAUTIFUL TO BOOT!!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH
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