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TheAmericanDream — Aqua BBW Commission
Published: 2012-11-27 05:02:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 10873; Favourites: 316; Downloads: 282
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Aqua colored sketch commission forRelated content
Comments: 11
Something about it seems off. I usually LOVE your stuff, and this definitely isn't bad or anything- but not your best.
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It has some issues I'll give ya that. I think its either the pose or the arms.
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Good to see you taking criticism in stride! Can't wait to see more of your stuff.
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The arms look a little short and her eyes a bit out of sync, but otherwise it looks really good! It's not like I can draw better or anything anyway.
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I love the pose in this one. It sort of looks like she's either too heavy to move, she's just finished waddling her way over, or she's struggling to stay standing. Or maybe a combination of the three, I don't know; it's early and I'm tired. At any rate, I really like this. It really gives a sense that she's heavy.
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Not bad. There really isn't a'lot of fat Aqua, and what little there was prior to this commission... wasen't very good.
Thank you for your contribution.
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holy shit! I never expected a commission of freaking Aqua by you that wasn't commissioned by myself...but damn I'm glad it happened!
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I know this is highly off-topic, but whenever I see the commissioner's avatar, I have the "Good Lord, That Ass is Too Fat" song stuck in my head. XD
In other news, I love how you did the coloring here, especially for her outfit. Wonderful body to boot.
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