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Naisk47 [2017-11-11 03:27:27 +0000 UTC]

  heyya ^^ I'm here on behalf of  #projectcomment.

  That amazing night sky is what caught my and I had to take a closer look, it's simply stunning.
  There are some point that I would like to address, but first again that sky, the details and color is simply eye catching, the falling asteroid looks amazing too. Also amazing details on the hair .
  Now to the fun part D:...
  Composition : it's not very well balance and it's too over to the right, also I can't really point what is the centerpice of the artwork, is it the castle or the planet or the asteroid, it's very confusing. To improve on this, the center piece should be in the center of the and it should move up a bit. Also there is problem with where you've put the girl, because she is dwarfed by the castle, I understand that you're trying to make it like she is looking at the castle, but doesn't work from that angle. I suggest that you move her up, high enough that we can see her torso and change the perspective in ways to give the impression of looking up.
  Lighing : you really like bright lights huh ? You seems to have good knowledge of where it's posistion, but I think you have overuse it, it's everywhere so much that it put the artwork of balance. And there should be more in variation in the light tensity and color too, light have color to.

anyway, that's all I have to say. I hope this will help in your future art works
Have a great day.

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Emmythetaciturn [2017-11-08 23:35:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh this is absolutely amazing!! The colors are bright and caught my eye. I love the stars and the detail of the planets. I'm curious of what the picture is telling, is there a story behind it? 
One thing I would fix is instead of a blue shirt, maybe you should've done green? To help her shoulders 'pop' more. But it still looks wonderful the way it is!
please keep up the amazing work! I can't wait to see what more you came up with! 

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nf4life [2017-11-04 06:18:20 +0000 UTC]

awsome relly love but it was alot batter to add more from the chractuer dowen there but stell nice  work

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TOBIdrawings [2017-10-31 16:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I came from--->projectcomment.deviantart.com/ . I am here with the purpose of improve the abilities of the artists that participate in the projectcomment group, so I hope that you does not get hurt. Frist of all I think that here your signature seems mixed with the background. In my opinion that is a bad thing, but anyone can do what they want. The girl at the bottom of the drawing has got splendid hair, it seems real. In the tag I read "tree",but I do not understand where it is, can you help me?. Generally I adore this atmosphere, it reminds me of the final levels of "The legend of Spyro, dawn of the dragon" bacause of the purple and this dream-space landscape. The Planets and the meteor are beautiful, expecially the metheor. Maybe the castle is a little bit too bright. I think that the title ruins the entire draw, without it maybe the draw will be more spectacular. I hope you will enjoy my comment, keep up the good work!

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Absbor-Phamtusin [2017-10-29 10:25:34 +0000 UTC]

So pretty

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Sunstar-Of-The-North [2017-10-28 21:15:14 +0000 UTC]

This looks so cool! 

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