Comments: 12
TakPotato2000 [2019-07-02 22:40:16 +0000 UTC]
Nice highlights on the skin
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HebiFuel [2019-06-29 07:18:50 +0000 UTC]
Holy shit, those outfits look incredible! Just... damn!
I think ideally the shading on the skin could've been a bit better—their clothes are so much more detailed that they almost look out-of-place on their bodies, almost as if the skin and clothes were drawn in two conflicting styles. Also, the white on the bottom outline of their boobs and Yuel's belly aren't particularly helping matters. I can see the effect you're going for, and I've seen other artists do it, but I think yours are a little too sharp and thin, making them pop-out a little too much. I'd look at how pixiveo does it in his stuff, like this piece here:
Also, in the pose they're in, their bellies really should be smushing into each other more instead of just layering-over each other, but I imagine that would've been much harder to do.
Altogether, though, it's still a really impressive piece, and I can hardly believe how big of a step-up this is from your last one. The clothes came-out incredibly well, and the pattern on Societte's dress looks absolutely stunning.
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TheBreadGuardian In reply to HebiFuel [2019-06-30 03:44:40 +0000 UTC]
'almost as if the skin and clothes were drawn in two conflicting styles', heh, you caught me :P
Again, thank you for pointing out things I can do better; its always helpful to know what's great and whats not so great.
And trust me, I too would have liked to see the bellies smushing but I'm just not quite good enough to pull it off effectively (I don't think. I didn't actually try)
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HebiFuel In reply to TheBreadGuardian [2019-06-30 07:24:35 +0000 UTC]
I had a feeling. Still, you've really come a long way since you started-out. Keep it up!
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Tight-Fit [2019-06-27 20:18:42 +0000 UTC]
The outfits came out really nice, well done!
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ChybChub6 [2019-06-27 19:31:42 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you really one-upped your previous works here. Whatever you're doing, do more of it, it's working!
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Heriyasuki [2019-06-27 17:52:43 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOD?! gbf gays and fats are so good... Thank you for letting me inspire you!
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Heriyasuki In reply to TheBreadGuardian [2019-06-28 08:43:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh god if only there was some way you could thank me... *cough cough* fat Lyria *cough cough*
Naa but seriously this is great and one hell of a surprise to wake up to. I have to thank you for the shout-out, too.
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PTDLSD [2019-06-27 14:11:08 +0000 UTC]
Soft kitsune snuggle time
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Jigglygirlbellies [2019-06-27 13:24:49 +0000 UTC]
So sexy! Look at their jiggly thicc bodies!
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GethEngineer [2019-06-27 12:36:16 +0000 UTC]
cuuuute!
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