KoreanSamurai [2011-04-14 05:50:40 +0000 UTC]
That's so sad... D: It really made me sad with the whole before look/after look. Despite the sadness in the middle, there's some happiness in the beginning and end. Sure, it's not the same in the end, but I think you portrayed nicely how you realized something that was more precious than it was before! :] Awesome poem!
P.S. I seriously thought this was a poem dedicated to the "future Zim who conquered Earth" lol. xD
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thecandychaos In reply to KoreanSamurai [2011-04-20 01:09:03 +0000 UTC]
Aww, well, I'm sorry you're sad, but at least the poem conveyed the message it was supposed to! Hahaha thank you~ Yes, you always want to appreciate what you have before it's gone. Thanks again!!!
P.S. Maybe it was! *gasp* O_O jklol~
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