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Published: 2012-06-22 05:35:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 2
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Description I want to make OC's!!! I'm just going to draw whatever pops into my mind for now. I think I'll make the "Lady of the Lake" or something later on.

So enjoy
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Anuyasha [2012-06-22 07:08:11 +0000 UTC]

All the natural details... makes me wonder how much greater you'll be in a few years.

Since I only come to DA to update my challenges and check on you I might as well critique some stuff.

1. Eyes: Couldn't be more beautiful. But the left eye placement needs to be a slight lower to where if there was an ear the ear wouldn't look to high up. The eyes and nose have an angle connection to the ears. The end of the nose is the end of the ear. The top of the eyes is the top of the ear I believe. I under stand that's the angled eye tilted way so that the eye should look more tilted, but if there were an ear it would look strange higher than the other.

2. Shading is perfect although the lighting needs more depth. It's hard to find a light source.

3. The arms and chest are hard to find but it all works out somehow.

I find this really pretty and I really want to get a tablet and paint software so you can show me how you do such an amazing job. *_*

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TheCookieMonster78 In reply to Anuyasha [2012-06-22 07:13:39 +0000 UTC]

You do NOT know how much your constructive criticism has helped me. I wouldn't be at this stage in art without your help Anu :3 I can't wait till you get your tablet so you can draw even cooler stuff with it. I really need to start pointing off a freaking light source T3T But anyways, thanks for helping meh~

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