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Published: 2012-07-03 02:15:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 945; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 33
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Anuyasha [2012-07-04 05:22:22 +0000 UTC]

SWEET BABY JESUS.
SO FREAKING SMEXY ALDSFJ;ALDSFA;SDLFKJ
SUGOI.

Wow... less than three

How am I suppose to critique this...

..........................................................OH. OKAY.

1. Near the left breast, were there is an armpit line, it should be connected to the boobie.
2. The waist needs more indent. Considering how her legs are at the side of the chair, her waist should look like it's being turned. So just add on some stretch lines.
3. As I recall there are four legs on a chair. XD
4. On the second leg (leg on the chair) from the right; just about there, is were the feet should start to connect to the legs on the actual girl.
5. The right knee cap needs to be more defined.
6. The accessories in her hair need to be more shaded.
7. Her eyebrows need to be more defined.
...and that's just about all the things I can catch. Don't worry, they are small and none of them I could find where major. So your all right!

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TheCookieMonster78 In reply to Anuyasha [2012-07-05 01:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Woo! I btw I'm a little lazy D:

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