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outbreak21093 [2015-02-08 09:31:36 +0000 UTC]
Heh. I feel this page could be done with more originality than just using UBW, but I have no idea of the how. XD Is this the end of the prologue? It certainly feels like it. XD I look forward to more from you, as always! You remain one of my favorite authors, and one of the few that withstand the test of time. XD Great going!
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to outbreak21093 [2015-02-09 00:49:01 +0000 UTC]
Yup, it probably could have, but honestly, given the short, simple nature of this page, I felt going with something equally simple, yet meaningful. A picture is worth a thousand words, as they say, and the wasteland of UBW has always been the biggest contender in that category for me. ^^
And nope, the prologue's not over just yet! Got a few more pages to go yet, but likely only two or three...maybe. :3
And thanks, glad I could still be here to keep it going for you! XD
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Pr0teusUnbound [2015-02-07 15:42:58 +0000 UTC]
i should recite this every time i walk into a bar
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to Pr0teusUnbound [2015-02-09 00:57:10 +0000 UTC]
DO IT
I assure you, the booze will taste THAT MUCH BETTER FOR IT
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Enigmaticmuffin [2015-02-07 14:32:18 +0000 UTC]
COMIC SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANS
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to Enigmaticmuffin [2015-02-07 18:02:28 +0000 UTC]
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Actually most of this was written in that font deliberately anyway given how I was trying to use it as a way to show how the Walfas comics which inspired the idea could be done.
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to TheEvilDead1987 [2015-02-09 00:56:33 +0000 UTC]
Heheh, yep, that's exactly what this page was supposed to do!
You've met the villains, so next it'll be some of the heroes and antiheroes! Look forward to it!
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Yamimaru-no-Jigoku [2015-02-07 06:39:09 +0000 UTC]
Aw, excellent just what I needed to see especially considering what happened in the latest chapter of Imperfect Metamorphosis.
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to Yamimaru-no-Jigoku [2015-02-09 00:55:26 +0000 UTC]
I stopped reading over a year ago, I couldn't handle it.
But oh yeah, IM was one of the main benchmarks I kept in mind when making this. IM is grimdark, whereas CCC is meant to be grimGAR. I.e, sure, the setting is dark as all hell, but it's the gutsy, brave, bold, and wild characters that make it fun to read. Just because the setting is bleak and depressing and bitter is no reason that all of the characters need to be as well, after all.
Deathwave's rages and sociopathy, XIII's dissonant cheerfulness and mad science, Tenshio's hotblooded wildness, Leiden's seductive evil, Iku's calculating, clinical martial lightning...All intense, burning points scattered across this world so far. The chaos and hell of A-Day's effects are nothing more than a stage, in other words. This story is about rebuilding, for better or for worse, and the crazy, rock n' roll heroes, villains and antiheroes living in it.
And we haven't even started releasing our files on the Outside World yet~
:3
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to Yamimaru-no-Jigoku [2015-02-10 13:48:38 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's my day ruined.
Here's a protip: When I say I stopped reading a fic, particularly due to the overwhelming amounts of grimdark and depression, THAT IS NOT AN INVITATION TO TELL ME ABOUT THE AFOREMENTIONED GRIMDARK AND DEPRESSING SHIT.
Now I'm going to be here for the next few hours imagining how exactly that went down, to which the only way to answer that is by going back and reading. Which I swore not to do.
Tl;dr I stopped reading IM for a reason, and I avoid it because not knowing is much better for my peace of mind rather than simply hearing about it and then unwillingly ending up thinking about. I don't CARE how bad it's getting, I DON'T WANT TO KNOW. So kindly keep details to yourself in future.
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Kigurou-Enkou [2015-02-06 23:36:05 +0000 UTC]
It's coming... 83
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to Kigurou-Enkou [2015-02-07 00:33:57 +0000 UTC]
CAN YOU FEEL THE SULPHUR IN THE AIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIR
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Kigurou-Enkou In reply to TheDarkbreaker [2015-02-07 08:53:18 +0000 UTC]
SIX TIMES KNOCKING ON THE DOOR
NO RESPONSE BUT HEY, GET READY!
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MikhailCarter [2015-02-06 21:08:29 +0000 UTC]
I am the bone of my darkfics,Β
Procrastination is my body and energy drinks are my bloodΒ
I have ruined over a thousand childhoodsΒ
Unknown to good story telling, nor known to darker and edgier tropesΒ
Have withstood great criticism from hatersΒ
Yet those haters will never know awesomeness
So, as I upload...
UNLIMITED GRIM-GAR WORKS!Β
Do you have enough hype trains, Alexander Darkbreaker?
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to MikhailCarter [2015-02-07 00:39:09 +0000 UTC]
MONGREL!
MongrelmongrelmonggrelmongrelMONGRELMONGREL!
As if a mere faker could ever defeat the original! Me, the KING OF DARKFICS!
CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!
...I don't believe we just acted out the finale of UBW
Then again, I am totally okay with this turn of events anyway. 8D
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neogoki [2015-02-06 19:09:37 +0000 UTC]
make me wonder, how would Shirou or EMIYA fare in Gensoukyou?
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to neogoki [2015-02-07 00:36:11 +0000 UTC]
Actually...he probably might not do too badly, to be honest.
Let's face it, this is exactly the kind of setting he'd be at home in, though with significantly less bloodshed.
It'd be like Carnival Phantasm all day every day. Except when it goes darker, but even then, I think he'd still manage. Granted, he'd be outclassed against some ofΒ the higher leveled bosses, but still.
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neogoki In reply to TheDarkbreaker [2015-02-07 07:36:25 +0000 UTC]
Shirou is almost always outclassed, nothing new here
I wonder how many of the girls would fall for him?
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to neogoki [2015-02-10 17:46:33 +0000 UTC]
Given that by and large Gensokyo is considered to be a yuri heaven, surprisingly he might only trip flags for far less than would be expected from a harem protagonist of his caliber...but then probably still way more than normal such protagonists. XD
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neogoki In reply to TheDarkbreaker [2015-02-10 18:23:34 +0000 UTC]
from what I seen in fanworks it can be, but as often it is not
and once Shirou starts cooking countless girls will fall for his HAREM-powers
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The-Out-Of-World [2015-02-06 17:20:02 +0000 UTC]
I r8 it gr8 m8 8/8
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TheDarkbreaker In reply to The-Out-Of-World [2015-02-07 00:40:29 +0000 UTC]
> '8's
>not '9's
BRO DO YOU EVEN THE STRONGEST
XD
I'm sorry, I had to. I'm kinda surprised at the amount of feedback on this particular page, though.
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