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Thedarkone88 — A not so nightmare
Published: 2004-12-12 18:05:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 30; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description I laugh
I cry
I live
I die

You see
What am I
Who are you
Am I a lie

Feel the fire
The burning flame
Don't you see
It's me you maim

Thrust your dagger
Deep in me
Twist it sharply
Bring me to my knees

Black as night
Hold me tight
You hated me
With all your might

Now see what you've done
As you watch me bleed
Your trechious heart
Is what killed me

The nightmare done
Tears in my eyes
I saw my death
the blood on my hands

It was me that did the deed
I hated myself and thought I would do a favor
The knife in my other hand
It wasn't a nightmare
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Comments: 3

DementedLynx [2004-12-12 18:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. I like it. Though, the first verde is a bit cliche, but it works here.

LyNxie

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Thedarkone88 In reply to DementedLynx [2004-12-12 18:10:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much.

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DementedLynx In reply to Thedarkone88 [2004-12-12 18:11:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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