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Thedarkone88 — Alone

Published: 2003-08-09 22:16:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 45
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Description Fighting without strength
Hidden without fear
Everyone I know and love
Doesn't see me standing here
No matter how hard I try
they don't ever look back
why must I be treated this way
Be treated like dog crap

Frogotten about at parties
Even after I scream
Left alone with only my thoughts sometimes
And maybe my dreams

I can't wait until they find out
what I have been thinking this past year
Maybe when they wake up sometime
I won't be here

No sister to bug
No daughter to scold
No friend to disagree with
No love to hold

I'm not saying I'm going to go jump off a cliff
I'm not that crazy yet
This is just a warning to those who know me
Remember me, not forget
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Comments: 7

selfexpression [2004-01-13 00:09:54 +0000 UTC]

danni dan! lol. dude that is coolest name ever... but about your amazing poem... it rules. i've felt that way... *sniffles* but yeah. you can talk to me anytime! and during bio of course... well that is a boring class. but yeah. i love how you look so happy in the picture, and then we get to know what you're thinking... oh yeah, can i photograph you sometime? you're so pretty and i love your hair and smile... *puppy eyes* please...

-jen

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Thedarkone88 In reply to selfexpression [2004-01-13 01:54:24 +0000 UTC]

sure why not...

Yes I love this poem...tis my favorite

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TearsFallingUp [2003-10-28 23:14:29 +0000 UTC]

I realy love this. this is so sad and beautiful.. I understand that feeling completely. been alone all my life.


take care

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Thedarkone88 In reply to TearsFallingUp [2003-10-29 02:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. You take care also

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angelusofdeath [2003-08-12 04:48:21 +0000 UTC]

u know how i feel
anyway great one !
anyway dont know why r u alone u look nice!

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Thedarkone88 In reply to angelusofdeath [2003-08-13 13:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...yeah i don't know why either lol. That poem is just mostly about my family thats all.

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sadisticfreek [2003-08-10 06:42:33 +0000 UTC]

It is... very good... I hope you start to... not feel so alone. Take care.

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