Comments: 28
Khrysteen [2013-05-14 15:32:15 +0000 UTC]
Awww... That was such a sweet ending. And I really like how you portrayed Lexy and Smudge, since they both have a lot riding on this even if it just seems like a silly game... There are a lot more consequences than what's on the surface.
Also, Eve and Leith are such cool characters! I can't wait to see more. >w<
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TheDeadlyNightshades In reply to Khrysteen [2013-05-29 22:20:14 +0000 UTC]
thanks for reading!! I'm glad you liked it ! yeah there's a lot riding on it for smudge and his family that's for sure.
i can't wait to see what happens to him in the epilogue.
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Aishishi [2013-05-07 20:28:50 +0000 UTC]
aww ;_;
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Sableyeguy [2013-04-30 10:20:06 +0000 UTC]
Smudge feels ;^;
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Deeborm [2013-04-29 00:40:28 +0000 UTC]
happy ending
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Seoul-Dew [2013-04-28 23:55:15 +0000 UTC]
wow I love love loved this mission ;A; gah I almost teared up. poor smudge. great job on this!
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TheDeadlyNightshades In reply to Seoul-Dew [2013-05-08 22:32:31 +0000 UTC]
oh wow thankyou! i'm glad you liked my comic so much ;a; <3333
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Azure-Lizard [2013-04-28 21:45:40 +0000 UTC]
Great story, best ending ever. I'm glad that you see Smudge like lonely, lost child, not like monster which many draw him. Seriously, awsome work.
Btw, congrat on finishing on time. I'll finish too, but bit later:>
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TheDeadlyNightshades In reply to Azure-Lizard [2013-05-08 22:34:19 +0000 UTC]
thankyou so much! it was such a stretch to get it done! ahhhh!I'm glad you liked my story and how it ended hehe <333
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Srarlight [2013-04-28 17:18:19 +0000 UTC]
GOSH such a touching ending! You did a good job expressing how they feel!
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ScourgeFeather [2013-04-28 16:10:25 +0000 UTC]
;A; So sad! Poor Smudge! When he saw his mom in Eve...
Great comic though! I love your team! Hope to see more in the future!
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TheDeadlyNightshades In reply to ScourgeFeather [2013-05-08 22:35:28 +0000 UTC]
yeah, smudge makes me feel so sad :C i'm sure i've written him a bit too childish but i don't care ;a; he's a lonely baby :C :C
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ZonnyBrown [2013-04-28 15:54:07 +0000 UTC]
THIS WAS SO TOUCHING ;;A;;
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RedRabbu [2013-04-28 12:25:54 +0000 UTC]
AWW EVE, THIS IS WHY I LOVE YOUUUU
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RedRabbu In reply to TheDeadlyNightshades [2013-05-08 23:39:21 +0000 UTC]
I imagine it happens a lot
EVE USED ATTRACT. OH GOD IT WAS SUPER EFFECTIVE, SOMEBODY GET A MOP.
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team-ironore [2013-04-28 10:51:58 +0000 UTC]
CRIES. This is so sad and ahhhh poor baby smudge and little Eve looks so sad :C
Weehhh their little hug ;m;
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TheDeadlyNightshades In reply to team-ironore [2013-05-08 22:36:51 +0000 UTC]
yeah poor babs :C i want to know what's gong to happen to smudge's spirit ;m;
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