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Published: 2010-02-20 01:01:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description night shadows strike the bell
              thirteen
               harbingers of the coming
             moonstar

icy wishes held between
the taut invisible strings
           of morning
           as it
           breaks A P A R T

             crimson
              in the light
             of our sins

  order, order
       here lies
       the broken ties
       submit and bless
       they /all/ confesss

        lilacs
grow in the crevice,
   the darkest
        soil of my mind

   existence is merely
     the hallucination of the hidden
                dreamer.
     for once,
   i just want to be me.
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Comments: 4

shebledgreenink [2010-02-22 01:18:32 +0000 UTC]

that's why it sounded like your older work.

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TheDeathofAramis In reply to shebledgreenink [2010-02-22 05:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Is that a good thing or a bad thing?

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shebledgreenink In reply to TheDeathofAramis [2010-02-22 05:40:58 +0000 UTC]

at first I was curious as to why you'd suddenly gone back to the way you used to write. then I read the comments.
it's neutral, I guess. at this point I don't think you were worse then; I just think you've matured and you're different now.

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CheeRah [2010-02-21 04:11:58 +0000 UTC]

nice

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