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KeIIion [2014-09-27 16:20:03 +0000 UTC]
can you tell me the comic ? Look so awsomeΒ
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Antebus88 [2012-10-14 06:03:53 +0000 UTC]
Great piece. Could I ink this for you? Also I would love to see colors applied too.
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theDougArthur In reply to Antebus88 [2012-10-14 19:56:51 +0000 UTC]
Sure. I'd love to see some inks on it. I started inking it at one point, but never got very far. I'd like to see colors on all of my work some day. Lol
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Antebus88 In reply to theDougArthur [2012-10-14 20:13:37 +0000 UTC]
Okeydoke. I'll give it a shot.
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Antebus88 In reply to theDougArthur [2012-10-14 20:23:50 +0000 UTC]
I planned on it. I'm not gonna steal your thunder. Lol.
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gwdill [2012-02-02 19:03:27 +0000 UTC]
Well done!
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theDougArthur In reply to imafrakkincylon [2012-02-02 19:25:32 +0000 UTC]
First of all, thank you very much for your comments and compliments (and maybe I can get this inked because I'd love to see your colors on it). Secondly, would you just recommend from a colorist's POV that I give her arm, hair, etc. a simple rim or more of core shadowing? Frankly I don't have a lot of experience yet and the more I can learn the better.
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imafrakkincylon [2012-02-02 17:09:10 +0000 UTC]
As far as panel 3 goes, it's not a bad idea, the way you've got the shadows put in there.
But from my perspective, coloring that would be easier if you erased out some of the shade to include rim lighting - where her powers, which are obviously going to be a light source, are hitting her shoulders and etc.
Also bear in mind that during the day light bounces all over and there are two light sources - the sun, which the car is obviously blocking, but also the sky, which the car is not blocking - behind the car, behind the car's back tire, and behind her left arm, all of that would be rimmed in cast light from the sky bouncing blue light around. So you'd want a bit of a rim around these where there are no inks, if only a small one.
Just an observation - I personally dislike going in to edit in the rim lighting myself if it's not present in the inks to begin with. I'd much rather the light be there from the start.
Take that or leave that as you see fit.
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mechangel2002 [2012-02-01 21:20:43 +0000 UTC]
Awesome use of perspective, you pulled off a few angles I don't know many would even TRY to attempt!
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theDougArthur In reply to mechangel2002 [2012-02-01 22:28:11 +0000 UTC]
Well that's good to hear! I know a lot of things I need to work on, but if you have the chance, I'd love to hear any advice or critiques. (thanks for your input already)
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MagnusCarnage [2012-02-01 18:47:24 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous work, nice panels, like the figures and the flow of the action. Very nice!
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dalgoda7 [2012-02-01 15:46:16 +0000 UTC]
I love the changes in POV here, especially panels 1 and 4.
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theDougArthur In reply to dalgoda7 [2012-02-01 16:39:30 +0000 UTC]
thanks! I'm trying to get better at different angled shots to make it more interesting. panel 4 was especially fun once I got going.
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johnercek [2012-02-01 04:13:17 +0000 UTC]
the page looks great.
buuuuuuut.
that truck in the first panel is out of perspective in a bad way. given the height that the flying superhero is, dragging a child that is being lifted above a car, and a camera looking down on all of that, means that the camera's "eye level" should be high enough to incorporate all that action...i.e. the camera should be above the top edge of the trailer of a truck no matter how far away it is.
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WrathOfReeses [2012-02-01 02:39:08 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad the kitty is still alive xD
It looks really great so far! I can't wait to see more
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theDougArthur In reply to WrathOfReeses [2012-02-01 05:35:19 +0000 UTC]
Unfortunately the sample script only has one more page and it's kind of a cliff hanger. Maybe I'll just add a 7th page and have the villains internally combust. the end.
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WrathOfReeses In reply to theDougArthur [2012-02-01 14:23:16 +0000 UTC]
I like the combustion idea. It's a true thing anyway...I don't care what people say.
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cperkins482 [2012-02-01 02:06:27 +0000 UTC]
Great work! Rogue looks just like she should. I dunno bout that shadow issue. I actually think it'll work fine if the coloring (specifically lighting effects) are done right. There's clearly a light of flashy light and stuff going down, and think heavy shadows in the midst would emphasize that.
PS. Love a good Cyke eye-beam shot!
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theDougArthur In reply to cperkins482 [2012-02-01 05:34:07 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I went with the older Rogue costume. Even though it's dated, it still beats the skirt off the new costume, literally.
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Larshas [2012-02-01 01:13:11 +0000 UTC]
I think it looks really nice. The only thing I don't like is all the heavy shadows in the third panel.
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Larshas In reply to theDougArthur [2012-02-01 01:25:13 +0000 UTC]
It just looks a bit overplayed. Especially on the face. :3 But it's still a cool panel. Just them shadowwws.
No problem!
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