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Published: 2018-08-04 20:44:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 15027; Favourites: 136; Downloads: 82
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My first entry forΒ Β "Image Pool Writing Contest".Formatting and typesetting for this piece was done by a friend who wishes to remain anonymous.
Word count: 1017
Picture ID: #129
This was a fun piece to write, though keeping myself to the 1100 word limit was a challenge. Very good practice in writing with economy, as my old Ethics professor would have said. Plus, fun pirate-speak!
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Comments: 4
First off I just want to congratulate you on having a caption of a high enough resolution to read without issue. Some long-time captioners still cant do it...
Your writing is as usual a cut above most others and I didn't stumble anywhere through the story. The coin gag was pretty good and got a chuckle as did the restaurant joke.
The overall setup was a bit odd since this was seemingly modern day (childrens restaurant reference) and the pirates were clearly old school 'not exist no more' pirates. Assuming its like an AU ot the grandma was centuries old fixes it I guess but still odd. The overall plot was simple which for a caption is perfectly fine.
My biggest gripe though is that the tf doesnt really match the image at any point. The girl is clearly upset in the image which the ghost pirate is not at the end. She's also holding up a red skirt which isnt present in the story at all.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Those are fair points as well and I can see now how I could have improved it.Β
And credit where credit is due, as mentioned in the description, TG-Vocals really did the layout for this one since I had never made a caption before.
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