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Project/Comic- "The God Machine - Rough Cut Series."
Character featured- Guy Salvatore.
Media- Pencil on comic paper.

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About-

Where to start?

It's probably pretty obvious that I took more time with this one. I really wanted to nail this one as much as i could since this is setting the tone for the final scene in this issue/book/chapter thing. Probably one of the hardest things to do on this page was the monologue. It's hard to write for a grieving 17 year old without going super cliche, but yet having to bring in that cliched dialog because he is a 17 year old mourning the loss of his dead girlfriend. I had to get back into my head when I was 17 and how i would react, and how i felt back then when my world was falling apart (luckily I didn't have to cope with the loss of a close loved one.)

When it comes to cleaning this up I'll do a proper epitaph on Sith's gave. I'll more than likely drop her birthday year and death year ( 2/12/82- 5/27/99 ) so I don't date the book in any particular year, but i'm still thinking about it since I like having them in that time period. Though I kinda want them in the mid 90's. I'm thinking on it. Pros and Cons about what it means to date a book.

I picked out some depressing music to try and get in the mood as i was creating this page. I think it kinda helped.. but i dunno, this page needs to be darker and sadder.

I missed the time and location card. Which is supposed to be "Earth- 4am; North Salem Cemetery."

-Chan

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Nature of project-

The Rough Cut Series is meant to be a preview/web comic of my comic series, "The God Machine." It's taking the original scripts and draft pages, and translating them to pencil only comic pages. There are no inks, formal fonts, or even blacked in areas. The idea behind this is to get you into the series before it comes out to print. Now when the comic goes to print media, you'll see the art work polished, inked, proper lettering, extra jokes, re-writes of the script, sometimes re-ordered panel layout, totally new pages, and bonus material. That way if you really like the project, you won't feel jipped that you'd be buying content that's already free online. Think of this as a preview, and a glimpse into the process in how I make comics.

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Description
-------full view please---------------

Project/Comic- "The God Machine - Rough Cut Series."
Character featured- Guy Salvatore.
Media- Pencil on comic paper.

------------------------------
About-

Where to start?

It's probably pretty obvious that I took more time with this one. I really wanted to nail this one as much as i could since this is setting the tone for the final scene in this issue/book/chapter thing. Probably one of the hardest things to do on this page was the monologue. It's hard to write for a grieving 17 year old without going super cliche, but yet having to bring in that cliched dialog because he is a 17 year old mourning the loss of his dead girlfriend. I had to get back into my head when I was 17 and how i would react, and how i felt back then when my world was falling apart (luckily I didn't have to cope with the loss of a close loved one.)

When it comes to cleaning this up I'll do a proper epitaph on Sith's gave. I'll more than likely drop her birthday year and death year ( 2/12/82- 5/27/99 ) so I don't date the book in any particular year, but i'm still thinking about it since I like having them in that time period. Though I kinda want them in the mid 90's. I'm thinking on it. Pros and Cons about what it means to date a book.

I picked out some depressing music to try and get in the mood as i was creating this page. I think it kinda helped.. but i dunno, this page needs to be darker and sadder.

I missed the time and location card. Which is supposed to be "Earth- 4am; North Salem Cemetery."

-Chan

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Nature of project-

The Rough Cut Series is meant to be a preview/web comic of my comic series, "The God Machine." It's taking the original scripts and draft pages, and translating them to pencil only comic pages. There are no inks, formal fonts, or even blacked in areas. The idea behind this is to get you into the series before it comes out to print. Now when the comic goes to print media, you'll see the art work polished, inked, proper lettering, extra jokes, re-writes of the script, sometimes re-ordered panel layout, totally new pages, and bonus material. That way if you really like the project, you won't feel jipped that you'd be buying content that's already free online. Think of this as a preview, and a glimpse into the process in how I make comics.

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