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Published: 2007-10-10 18:29:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Have you ever been confused
you don’t know what to do
you’re staring at your love
and she’s looking back at you
your chance you see is slipping
your chance to steal her heart
your life won’t be worth living
while you are apart
as you look at your love
you see it cannot be
you turn to leave your eyes tearing
your voice is bold your heart is fearing
and with that last goodbye hug
you leave your one and only love
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Comments: 6

bearhugplz [2007-10-24 17:29:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww. Been there done that got the t-shirt and ripped it on a fence post. :/

Very good. I like the rhythm of it.

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thegreatdivide05 In reply to bearhugplz [2007-10-30 01:17:52 +0000 UTC]

thanks. sad about the t shirt though

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bearhugplz In reply to thegreatdivide05 [2007-10-30 17:44:19 +0000 UTC]

yeah/

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Gezusfreek [2007-10-10 18:35:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That's really pretty... and strong.

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thegreatdivide05 In reply to Gezusfreek [2007-10-10 19:16:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks, at that time i was going through some really tough and emotional times.

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Gezusfreek In reply to thegreatdivide05 [2007-10-11 22:13:51 +0000 UTC]

I can tell just by reading it.

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