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TheGreatDragon — A Vampire's Kiss
Published: 2007-07-31 20:38:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 12589; Favourites: 349; Downloads: 34
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Description My teeth,
Long and sharp,
Run up and down your shivering body,
Gently, like playing a harp.
Long, soft strokes,
My snow white hand moves,
And grabs your head,
While my voice soothes.
I whisper calming thoughts,
Putting calming things in your mind,
With my voice and my eyes,
I hold you in a bind.
Yet that does not stop the shivering,
The fear in your face,
You do not understand,
Me, or my race.
Tempted, and temped no more,
My long-since dead heart beats,
Wanting to live again,
Wanting to taste your blood like sweets.

It is no longer I can wait,
I sink my fangs into your flesh,
Into that skin so pale with fear,
The skin of a maiden, so very fresh.
I wait for but a moment,
Until your fear turns to pleasure,
Still in my bind,
The pleasure I can measure.
Higher than sex,
But only good for one,
At least you don't have to worry,
About bearing me a son.
Your blood, filled with pleasure,
Seeps past my lips,
It's texture, it's power,
I drink it slowly, only in sips.
Strong like wine,
No, stronger still,
I continue to drink,
Until I've had my fill.

Now comes the choice,
Should I change you, or not,
Perhaps I should just leave you,
Leave you to rot.
But then, with skin so fair,
You should join me,
Not have to die right here,
Certainly not for all to see.
Loving your blood, and loving your looks,
I take my fangs away,
I lick at your neck,
My tounge having its way.
Cleaning up any mess,
And stopping further bleeding,
Your body will soon die,
Your heart leading.
I wait until your body dies,
Wait until you turn,
Now it is time,
Time for you to learn.
Hunting and surviving,
They coexist for us,
Though you have to have control,
And not give into bloodlust.

A vampire we are,
Souls we will not miss,
Just know you gave it away,
With the Vampire's Kiss.
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Comments: 133

MrLovelessss [2014-03-27 06:26:16 +0000 UTC]

F***ing amazing dude

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smartguy776 [2014-03-13 01:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful!

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Hunter-Trapper [2014-01-09 07:21:09 +0000 UTC]

Such evocative writing; I almost want to taste this woman too!

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Ravenssecret [2013-03-07 01:39:13 +0000 UTC]

I really like this work. I forgot that i had fav. it and tried to do it again. I have no idea if i commented so I thought i would let you know that this is good work. your writing creates great images.

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Meow-Meow-Galaxy [2013-01-02 01:02:04 +0000 UTC]

I lov this

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Zhariael [2012-10-28 20:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Aaah, I wish I could make a poem that well.
Well done! ^^ It was enjoyable to read!

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Mabitsa [2012-10-09 18:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow ...great

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JyurriSneffets [2012-09-03 21:35:18 +0000 UTC]

I like it..the indecisiveness at first and the rhythm...great.

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gothgirl1212 [2012-01-15 14:01:52 +0000 UTC]

i love it, its so... dark and suductive

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PhantomoftheNight117 [2012-01-08 08:09:06 +0000 UTC]

I love how he words together, like a story but it's poetry. Very beautiful!

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MoonDemonGirl [2011-11-12 20:52:39 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool. I love it.

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ColorfulRevenge [2011-11-04 01:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Nice, love it

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Artes-y-Letras [2011-09-18 04:46:48 +0000 UTC]

awesome!! adding it to my fave

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CallMeLunatik2 [2011-04-27 20:35:57 +0000 UTC]

OMG I love it! This is the best poem-ish thing about vampires I have read so far! x

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UndeadEvilAngel [2011-03-31 10:39:35 +0000 UTC]

Loved it. I cannot express the awesomness in words, so I'll just say it was excellent

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ValkyrieNix [2011-01-03 01:59:52 +0000 UTC]

I thought that was absolutely spectacular!!!

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animegirlvamp [2010-12-31 15:38:14 +0000 UTC]

wow that was awsome i love u

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jarleynygmobblepot [2010-09-03 21:28:26 +0000 UTC]

smexy

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babegirl96 [2010-08-22 01:40:30 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing

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Beyond-Birthday-666 [2010-07-22 05:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Omg that's so beautiful ! How can she fear a Beast that is so Human ...

simply amazing

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inuyashagirl916 [2010-06-12 06:06:28 +0000 UTC]

I HEART THIS!!!

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InuYasha-Kyuubi [2010-06-08 20:36:53 +0000 UTC]

AmAzEiNg! O.o

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XxNicole13xX [2010-05-26 22:32:21 +0000 UTC]

awesomez

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SugarSweetSally [2010-04-18 23:30:14 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome.

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naruhina25 [2010-01-17 02:34:31 +0000 UTC]

verrrry gawjus wording! me liek!

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naruhina25 [2010-01-17 02:34:20 +0000 UTC]

verrrry gawjus wording! me liek!

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Werewolfchick777 [2010-01-16 02:10:37 +0000 UTC]

Amazingly good stuff ^.^

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Missouioui [2009-12-29 11:06:34 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful.
Beautiful, beautiful.

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angel3181 [2009-11-11 01:27:47 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Love it!

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TheGreatDragon In reply to angel3181 [2009-11-14 01:17:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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dragon-icewing [2009-11-04 03:03:06 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem. It's romantic and sweet and mysterious and just really good! lol Keep up the good work.

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TheGreatDragon In reply to dragon-icewing [2009-11-05 01:23:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'll try to keep it up.

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dragon-icewing In reply to TheGreatDragon [2009-11-05 02:16:27 +0000 UTC]

yay! lol

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SnapeisSexy [2009-09-01 01:15:03 +0000 UTC]

I love both poems.
I think I prefer yours however,
It just appeals to me, Very clever
xxx

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TheGreatDragon In reply to SnapeisSexy [2009-09-01 20:51:02 +0000 UTC]

:3 Thank you very much. It's been a while since people have commented on my poem.

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SnapeisSexy In reply to TheGreatDragon [2009-09-01 20:52:38 +0000 UTC]


your very welcome
x

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12sasha20 [2009-08-31 22:09:21 +0000 UTC]

wow....so dramatic 0.0....i love it! idk how you did it but i felt the emotion the two have ..great job.

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TheGreatDragon In reply to 12sasha20 [2009-09-01 20:51:52 +0000 UTC]

Heheh. Thank you. Yeah, I didn't realize what was in the poem until after I finished it.

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12sasha20 In reply to TheGreatDragon [2009-09-02 23:26:33 +0000 UTC]

hehehe thts okie...i do tht all the time...when i draw it starts out as something i want...then something better in the end ^.^

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Softkit [2009-08-07 00:18:50 +0000 UTC]

love the poem you did! it was amazing to read!

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TheGreatDragon In reply to Softkit [2009-08-07 03:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. ^^

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Softkit In reply to TheGreatDragon [2009-08-07 21:03:03 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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EclipsaAgatashi [2009-06-28 10:16:23 +0000 UTC]

That was beautiful. =,) I love this. It is so...Captivating. ^^ I love this...Again. ^^"

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TheGreatDragon In reply to EclipsaAgatashi [2009-06-29 01:11:56 +0000 UTC]

^^ Glad you like it.

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EclipsaAgatashi In reply to TheGreatDragon [2009-06-29 03:43:30 +0000 UTC]

^^

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katez-chan [2009-04-09 04:57:49 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.. it was pretty good, but maybe better if it didn't rhyme? I dunno... I don't like rhyming poetry much...

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TheGreatDragon In reply to katez-chan [2009-04-10 20:40:44 +0000 UTC]

'S'alright. At one point I had to think about it. But, it mostly fell into place. But, it's okay. Didn't expect everyone to like everything I do. That's why I put it on here, to have people criticize my work.

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WolfSkye [2009-03-28 02:58:09 +0000 UTC]

I liked that one. Nice job!

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3grim6 [2008-12-23 06:56:49 +0000 UTC]

well written, erotic but also conservative at the same time.

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TheGreatDragon In reply to 3grim6 [2008-12-23 20:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you.

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