Comments: 133
MrLovelessss [2014-03-27 06:26:16 +0000 UTC]
F***ing amazing dude
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smartguy776 [2014-03-13 01:45:12 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful!
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Hunter-Trapper [2014-01-09 07:21:09 +0000 UTC]
Such evocative writing; I almost want to taste this woman too!
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Ravenssecret [2013-03-07 01:39:13 +0000 UTC]
I really like this work. I forgot that i had fav. it and tried to do it again. I have no idea if i commented so I thought i would let you know that this is good work. your writing creates great images.
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Zhariael [2012-10-28 20:12:30 +0000 UTC]
Aaah, I wish I could make a poem that well.
Well done! ^^ It was enjoyable to read!
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JyurriSneffets [2012-09-03 21:35:18 +0000 UTC]
I like it..the indecisiveness at first and the rhythm...great.
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gothgirl1212 [2012-01-15 14:01:52 +0000 UTC]
i love it, its so... dark and suductive
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MoonDemonGirl [2011-11-12 20:52:39 +0000 UTC]
This is really cool. I love it.
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CallMeLunatik2 [2011-04-27 20:35:57 +0000 UTC]
OMG I love it! This is the best poem-ish thing about vampires I have read so far! x
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animegirlvamp [2010-12-31 15:38:14 +0000 UTC]
wow that was awsome i love u
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babegirl96 [2010-08-22 01:40:30 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing
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XxNicole13xX [2010-05-26 22:32:21 +0000 UTC]
awesomez
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naruhina25 [2010-01-17 02:34:31 +0000 UTC]
verrrry gawjus wording! me liek!
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naruhina25 [2010-01-17 02:34:20 +0000 UTC]
verrrry gawjus wording! me liek!
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Werewolfchick777 [2010-01-16 02:10:37 +0000 UTC]
Amazingly good stuff ^.^
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angel3181 [2009-11-11 01:27:47 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! Love it!
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SnapeisSexy [2009-09-01 01:15:03 +0000 UTC]
I love both poems.
I think I prefer yours however,
It just appeals to me, Very clever
xxx
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TheGreatDragon In reply to 12sasha20 [2009-09-01 20:51:52 +0000 UTC]
Heheh. Thank you. Yeah, I didn't realize what was in the poem until after I finished it.
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12sasha20 In reply to TheGreatDragon [2009-09-02 23:26:33 +0000 UTC]
hehehe thts okie...i do tht all the time...when i draw it starts out as something i want...then something better in the end ^.^
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Softkit [2009-08-07 00:18:50 +0000 UTC]
love the poem you did! it was amazing to read!
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TheGreatDragon In reply to Softkit [2009-08-07 03:09:36 +0000 UTC]
Well, thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. ^^
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EclipsaAgatashi [2009-06-28 10:16:23 +0000 UTC]
That was beautiful. =,) I love this. It is so...Captivating. ^^ I love this...Again. ^^"
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3grim6 [2008-12-23 06:56:49 +0000 UTC]
well written, erotic but also conservative at the same time.
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