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DarkRapier [2019-10-31 19:10:15 +0000 UTC]
I’ve always appreciated a writer’s ability of construct so much from simply words, and I loved the interaction you wrote between the characters. I think one thing that I really liked about this drabble was that it portrayed Sylvia as a competent, capable fighter, and that beyond healing, she possessed a past where she once commanded an army in Dragonspyre (at least according to the boxes event lore). I think one thing I’ve noticed is that Sylvia is often portrayed based on her relevance to Malistaire, or as a gentle healer. And while she is both important to Mali, and also a soft-hearted person, it is quick to forget that she has a lot going on her own terms.
Oooh and that was why Avriel was pushed into the interview by Sylvia. She’s her apprentice, that makes so much more sense now.
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TheGreaterShade In reply to DarkRapier [2019-10-31 22:38:01 +0000 UTC]
Avriel is an innately curious but wary person, with a desire to understand that which she doesn't know. Her relationship to Sylvia comes partly out of sympathy and partly to make up for a mistake. Avriel's father is dead and her mother is not in the picture, she's was on her own for 5 years and was doing alright for herself. Until one day she encounters three people from whom she couldn't escape. From that point forward her whole understanding of life and her existence is turned upside down, as the Drakes effectively knocked her out and brought her back to Wizard City. Inadvertently she's then thrown into the deep end and expected to swim but doesn't and thus struggle's to thrive in her new surroundings. So Sylvia being who she is takes it upon herself to help Avriel adjust and teach her adult the culture she never got to know. Sylvia pushing her into that interview was more about trying to help her get acquainted with people and make friends.
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TheGreaterShade In reply to DarkRapier [2019-10-31 22:25:55 +0000 UTC]
Sylvia takes a lot of inferences to understand, I hate how people either portray her as a gentle healer like you said, or as a side character who just so happens to be there, or the worst one the rainbows and sunshine professor who's just happy ALL THE FRICKING TIME.
When I started writing stuff for her there were several things abou I had to establish.
Firstly, she and Malistaire are equals, their relationship was described by the game devs as harmoninous, a perfect cycle (life and death intertwined) so having them stand on equal footing power-wise makes sense. However I suspect Sylvia's a bit more forthright than Malistaire is in their relationship. Ambrose told us Malistaire loves power and the only thing he loves more than power is Sylvia, on top of this her monstrology page says Malistaire is clingy, so Sylvia is likely the more dominant in their relationship overall (does Malistaire have a problem with this, probably not, then again who knows)
Secondly, Sylvia is either afraid of nothing or at the very least not afraid of Malistaire. I say this is Malistaire is a person who's likely to play the intimidation card A LOT, so having a character who'd be so bold as to jump up on a table and look him in the eye and tell him he's wrong (not only that but with the power to back up that behavior) is a nice contrast. Having her be a coward or plain incompetent just doesn't make sense. If you look at her dialogue it's just so formally structured that she sounds to well-spoken to be incompetent. From her character model in the in the five boxes we're able to extrapolate that she at the very least owned a sword, having come from Dragonspyre she likely knew how to use it and quite well in my mind. If you ever bothered to look out the windows in the final room in the Avalon box, you'll notice that you're in Old Dragonspyre, meaning Malistaire, Cyrus, and Sylvia were around when the city fell, nobody survives something like that without knowing how to protect themselves reasonably well. I'd also like to imagine that nobody walks away from that without having some scars as well be they physical, emotional, or mental (did a story covering Sylvia's memories of the Titan's attack you might like it) a hint of tragedy in her character is also a nice touch. I'm merely wonder if she would ever have told her students, or have openly admitted her past if asked, in my mind she wouldn't seem like one to dwell upon it, whether that is because she has moved on or because it is painful to remember who knows, either is befitting of her really.
Thirdly, Sylvia is a leader or at the very least very charismatic, if in the five boxes she has the capacity to lead an entire army and conquer the entire Spiral then she would have to be able to lead and lead well, otherwise someone would have stabbed her in the back well before then. To me neither Malistaire or Cyrus really have this quality, this leads me to think that Malistaire was somewhat reliant on Sylvia for guidance in their marriage. Without Sylvia he had no one to guide him, no one to help him figure things out, no way of moving forward because he didn't really know how to, I think that's likely what drove him so far to bring her back, not so much the fact she was dead and gone, but the fact that he doesn't know how to exist without her, or he couldn't live without her.
Fourthly, Sylvia loves magic, so much so that not even a perilous future of death, war, and conquest would deter her from her studies, as well as to a point of wanting to teach. I can see her being a very clever and tactical opponent in a duel, using complex techniques to manipulate her opponents out of the gate then wanting for the right opportunity to strike. On the other hand I see Malistaire as less tactful and more brute force, because of necromancy's regenerative properties he can afford to miss out on some defense.
I definitely still think Sylvia is a kind and gentle person by nature, it takes a certain person to be a good teacher, and you have to be that if you want to teach kids. Do I think she was that way initially, no. I think her nature was exposed over time and through her relationship with her husband, I can see the younger version of Sylvia as a very intelligent, brash, fiery, thrill seeking personality that is very loyal to her country and would do anything for it. But over time and after witnessing the end of her world, I can see her as the person who ends up going on a journey in an effort to find herself and answer some big questions (what am I here for, what am I supposed to be, those kind of questions) a journey which eventually leads her to teaching magic at Ravenwood.
I could say more on the subject of her but that's the major pieces of it.
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DarkRapier In reply to TheGreaterShade [2019-11-06 05:01:13 +0000 UTC]
YES! Her and Mali being equals is something that I really stand for. Mali doesn't seem like the kind of guy that is easy to impress, so Sylvia must have been one hell of a person when she was alive. And I like the point you made of Slyvia being fearless as well. It takes a lot of guts to approach someone like Mali, but at the same time, it takes a lot of patience and persistence to love someone like him. They operate like ying and yang, but both of them have to be formidable in their own rights in order to juxtapose each other, and the timid and frail Slyvia that gets painted a lot in fan lore just doesn't make sense. I mean, you can still be kind hearted by nature, but still fierce, and that is often forgotten.
And I really enjoyed reading this breakdown of her character, because it put into perspective a lot of nuances about her (and also Mali) that I didn't consider
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TheGreaterShade In reply to DarkRapier [2019-11-06 07:01:17 +0000 UTC]
In addition to what I just said, I also like to believe Malistaire isn't incompetent even it comes to healing/providing first aid.
I think between the two of them, Mali and Syl both probably dabble a bit in each other's magic if only to attain a better understanding of their own. Contrast often aids in understanding, and sometimes to best way to learn is to teach, and what a better way to hone one's teaching skills than to teach another teacher?
Though why Sylvia might want to know necromancy is beyond me. Perhaps any use she might have for it is less for raising the dead and more so communing with spirits (as the life school does do that from time to time, though the spirits they seek are usually more nature based) or perhaps helping to release lost souls from their wanderings and help them cross over?
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TheGreaterShade In reply to DarkRapier [2019-11-06 06:25:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm am glad someone agrees and wants to break the HORRIBLE stereotype Sylvia's character has fallen into. But attraction works both ways, if you want I have Mali's general breakdown, outside of what has already been said and prior tio his going insane. If not just skip this...
I like to think Malistaire is a bit of a hidden gentleman. He puts up a very intimidating and brusque exterior but beneath that he's actually a bit softer and more delicate than some people may think. I see him as not only as a great studious practitioner of the magical arts but also as a patron of the arts in general. A lover of classical music (because under his scratched out favorite things on the W101 site it says symphonies), literature, philosophy, (because of what he was doing in the five boxes) and maybe through astronomy onto the pile (just cause the site mentions that he likes moonlit walks). Based on all of that I think he's a person with a uniquely different but still beautiful view of life and the world, innate perspective that comes from his own life experiences and his understanding of necromancy something Sylvia love about him or at the very least find interesting.
The biggest obstacle in getting Sylvia and Malistaire together I find is giving them common ground. I hate that some people just by default write them as complete polar opposites and expect that fate alone will hold them together and that they actually love each other when they have nothing in common. Based upon the real life experiences of 99% of the human population I can say this practically never happens. In love it is fine to be different from your partner, even extremely different, but if you have nothing in common, nothing you can enjoy together, then are you really in love with said person? Common ground is essential to any romantic relationship, for Malistaire and Sylvia I could see music being a big bridge between them, as well as star gazing perhaps. Given Mali'a general like of music and how thuerges interact with it I think it would make sense for them
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CubanCracker62 [2019-10-25 03:34:59 +0000 UTC]
Wow!! I really, really love this! This is such a good read!
I feel like you got the three of them down pretty well, and I especially like the little moments that show off Malistaire, Sylvia, and Avriel's characters :> I also like the little nod to Sylvia's five boxes outfit
Dude thank you so much for including them, and for the kind words ;v;
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TheGreaterShade In reply to CubanCracker62 [2019-10-25 04:36:44 +0000 UTC]
I will say I'm hoping to get Avriel's character study out soon, it's been so long since I wrote one of those, going to have to scrape off some rust.
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TheGreaterShade In reply to CubanCracker62 [2019-10-25 04:32:52 +0000 UTC]
You are most welcome, it's my pleasure to write about such lovely OC's such as your own. If you have any requests let me know and I'll see what I can do, this has been a most entertaining experience.
I might still make some tiny tweaks later on, there's a few inconsistencies in the text I want to work out, maybe stretch it a bit and push the word count up to 2000, but overall I am happy with this. It was very dialogue heavy but I don't think there was really a good way around it and it still reads fine with the breaks between the dialogue. I didn't do a lot of descriptors off the bat for Fala, Marcus, and Roman partly because people who are familiar with them would probably know what they look like, I might reprimand this at a later point. It tends to be a careful game of giving enough description without it becoming boring or starting to sound trashy. You know?
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CubanCracker62 In reply to TheGreaterShade [2019-10-25 20:20:44 +0000 UTC]
Lol yeah, writing involves a lot of rewriting. Still fun to do, though
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TheGreaterShade In reply to CubanCracker62 [2019-10-26 02:40:47 +0000 UTC]
Oof this is totally off topic, just watched the streams for the new lvl 130 dungeons and the wizard city underground, oof ITS SOOO GOOD! ITS TOO GOOD!
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CubanCracker62 In reply to TheGreaterShade [2019-10-26 19:52:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, I'm definitely excited for the surprise Dragonspyre and Wizard City lore :>
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TheGreaterShade In reply to CubanCracker62 [2019-10-26 21:30:24 +0000 UTC]
It's good, also kinda working some of it into Avriel's character. Hoping to have it up soon.
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