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TheGreatOmegaDragon — Nivis is angry
Published: 2011-12-13 18:59:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 939; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 14
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ok which one of ya jerkweeds made him mad!!naa i keed my entry for contest [link]
:huge EDIT: OK.. after getting a feedback from i decided it WAS a little shitty so i redid the lines and the feathers although they're probably still too long down the back and not bright enough but i don't the experience or technology to do that ..
and this was a improve contest so while my skill is still the same i'd say I'm better at listening and while i was a little down after her comment i rose to the challenge, to improve and have it right >.<
but i hope this is better ^^
and if i stare at this long enough i'll might do more ..like the background i need to get better at those!
paint tool sai
a shit load of time (more now cause of redo)
art me
character nivis
dont steal >:{
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YUS!!AND IT ISH MY COOKIE NOW!
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hehehe good work indeed^^and i can se your craziness in this as well
and i must honor you of making a background, to read that you really can make the normally,
sounds to me that you put you kick ass to finnish this, i don't know how to use Paint tool sai, because i never use it my self, so i don't know how to meet you up to this. but.
but as i do for the others so i will do for you as well:
his feathers do not go so long on his back, they start early. near the end of the neck, you must se them a bit like wings and you forget his feathers on his back-legs. i do really like to see that you made his mouth open, even if you didn't know how it looks up inside. you are indeed very brave artist, and i like that.
i dont know what more to say apart from. you need to study the character a bitt more before you start to coloring and so on.
but anyway well done.
i hope you understand my comment, is to help and not to harm you.
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hrmm quite fair i guess but just like to say something if i may?
..you never said you wanted it exactly like it to every detail otherwise I would of.
i did try and put the feathers on the legs but it never looked right, same with the back ones.
i wanted to do it my own way because if I had drawn it to a tea that's basically copying??
but i am glad you liked the mouth part that's was a tricking thing since i wasn't sure you would like it ^^
but i have taken in your advise I'm currently redoing line-works as it looked lazy and will redo the feathers if you want to??
hopefully this wont sound awful I'm pleased and loved, that you gave me feed back
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yeah thats true. i'm sorry, it just that i believed that it would help you out more if you try to. but still it needs to be after all in your own style.
o its okay i guess,
well both^^
it depends on how you place Nivis i guess
well i must say that you are indeed very brave to try Nivis with an open mouth:3
thats all up to you:3 your style/your art.
i am happy to say that i understand you, and i am glad that i could give you that feed back^^
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