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THEGREATTITANICCHICK — THE HEARSE AND HIS GRIFFIN 5b

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Nimble watched on as the massive ship slowly opened his eyes with a grunt of pain. Titanic was still pretty beat up from the encounter but most of the bruises went away and some scar tissue remained from where he scraped by a rock on the way to Zoith’s temple. “What was that?” Titanic grunted. “Salvagers.” Nimble said, “They almost got you but me and Herman stopped them with the help of Bismarck and Hood.” “I thought as much.” Titanic said, “Those buggards have been after me and my fleet for years.” Sleanok and Herman just joined the two of them as Sleanok said, “I’m glad you’re awake. How are you feeling?” “Better now.” Titanic said, “But I just pray my fleet is safe.” “Don’t worry about that.” Sleanok said, “Bismarck and Hood left to protect them and my lady Zoith sent Thunder-Raiser along with some of her best warriors to help.” “Thank you.” Titanic said, “How can I ever repay your kindness.” Sleanok only smiled as she then looked at Nimble who was still staring in awe up at the great ship. “I’ll leave you 3 alone.” Sleanok said as she then hobbled off. Titanic smiled a warm smile at Nimble and asked, “So you got a family?” “No.” Nimble sadly said, “They were killed by a mantacore last year.” “I’m sorry to hear that.” Titanic said, “My parents were both ghost ships.” His funnels sadly slumped back as his gaze fell, “They were taken by salvagers when I was a child.” “Were you ever captured by salvagers?” Nimble innocently asked. Titanic chuckled and said, “More times than I can count. But they never get much.” He smiled a sly smile and said, “I never give them the chance.” Nimble laughed as Titanic said, “Climb aboard, I want you to meet someone.” Nimble’s eyes lit up like a Christmas tree as she said, “YOU MEAN IT! YOU REALLY MEAN IT!” “Aye, I do.” Titanic chuckled. Nimble flew up to his deck with Herman right behind her. It was shortly after that she headed right for the wheel house while Titanic started to pull out of the dry-dock.

Nimble stepped into Titanic’s wheelhouse and couldn’t believe her eyes. The once proud wheelhouse of the great ship was now ravaged by salvagers. The helm, compass, and telegraph were all ripped away, leaving behind stumps of torn brass. Nimble wanted to cry, the wheelhouse was nothing like she’d seen in books or movies of the Titanic. “I hope the rest of the ship isn’t like this.” Nimble thought to herself as she headed for the grand staircase, only to find it was in no better condition…
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trulyfantasticme [2009-11-24 12:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Titanic: Climb aboard. I have someone for you to meet.
Nimble: YOU MEAN IT!? YOU REALLY MEAN IT!?
Titanic: Yes I do. *looks to the left to see a bunch of fangirls, human and ship alike*
Fangirls: OMG!!! ITS THE RMS TITANIC!!! GET HIM!!!!! *all jump on him, nuzzling him.*
Titanic: Help me.
Herman: Try blowing your whistles.
Titanic: *confused* Why would I do that?
Herman: Just trust me.
Titanic: Okay if you insist. *blows his horn so loud it can be heard in Arizona.*
*In Arizona*
*All tractors wake up and then fall to the ground, blowing their funny sounding horns*
Mater: So much for tractor tipping
*Back to Titanic*
*All fangirls groan happily and faint*
Titanic: Well that went well.
Herman: Lets get outta here. *Nimble and Herman jump on board and Titanic sails off.*

That was an example of the idea I gave you. Hope you like it.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-24 18:24:22 +0000 UTC]

i see. but the problem is where ti is facing in that pic you'd not see the girls. that's why i figured just one or two of them, kidnapping ti would show up better. lol

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-25 00:33:18 +0000 UTC]

ohhh okay. but you have to admit. what i wrote was pretty funny.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-25 00:34:00 +0000 UTC]

haha yea

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-25 00:41:42 +0000 UTC]

yeah. i kinda laughed writing it too.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-25 01:03:33 +0000 UTC]

haha yea i like the part with mater

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-25 02:16:53 +0000 UTC]

yeah. me too. i also like the part where titanic blows his whistles. it would probably make me faint like one of those fangirls. oh and you should also make titanic's fan ships you know, give them a banner saying "TITANICS #1" or "TITANICS #1 FAN." "TITANIC ROCKS" and give them Titanic's paint job.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-25 02:20:45 +0000 UTC]

lol i'll see what i can do, it'll have to depend if there is enough room.

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-25 02:42:59 +0000 UTC]

if you dont have enough room, than draw another pic and name it TITANIC'S #1 FAN or ULTIMATE TITANIC FAN
be sure that its a girl(Titanic's fans are mostly girls so it makes more sence but if you want it to be a dude, its fine with me.) be sure to dress her like the Titanic. and it can either be human, ship or hearse what ever you want. oh and you should write a one shot about how Titanic meets his #1 fan.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-25 02:57:08 +0000 UTC]

hmm i'll see. if i have time. i don't even know if i'll have time for the first pic, i've got like 3 reports due at once. but as for the one shot, i kinda already have something like that with the fifth chapter in THE HEARSE AND HIS GRIFFIN, when ti meets nimble.

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-25 04:45:45 +0000 UTC]

teachers they can give u so much homework these days

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-25 04:58:34 +0000 UTC]

yea no kidding.

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-25 14:55:22 +0000 UTC]

yeah.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-25 15:45:30 +0000 UTC]

but speaking of one shots, you should do one of ti being captured by salvagers that'd be awsome.

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-25 21:25:29 +0000 UTC]

sure why not? i have to write it down first.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-25 21:40:27 +0000 UTC]

ok cool lol thank you so much hehe.

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-26 00:00:57 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome, just let me finnish lullaby. than i'll be right on it. warning: it may take a while. u wouldnt mind if it took a while would you?

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-26 00:05:11 +0000 UTC]

naw not at all it takes me a while to do stories and stuff too lol

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-26 00:08:31 +0000 UTC]

okay good. what a relief. by the way, "naw, not at all" lol i like that.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-26 01:01:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-26 15:32:07 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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trulyfantasticme [2009-11-20 03:03:07 +0000 UTC]

i have a dumb question: Whats with the fangs? is titanic a vampireship or something?

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-20 03:08:19 +0000 UTC]

naw not at all. they are there for defence. all ships and other machines have them since some cannot really defend them selves other than that way.

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-20 14:26:47 +0000 UTC]

ohhh okay.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-20 19:16:12 +0000 UTC]

yep

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-21 05:56:03 +0000 UTC]

btw i love the expresson on titanics face, its awesome.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-21 05:57:38 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks. i was trying to go for that bragging look or that look of innocence.

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-21 06:58:13 +0000 UTC]

no problem.check out my profile. theres a new journey entry written i think you might like it

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-21 07:16:16 +0000 UTC]

i read it. thank you verry much.

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-21 15:07:06 +0000 UTC]

feel free to post a reply on that.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to trulyfantasticme [2009-11-21 18:15:03 +0000 UTC]

lol i see

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trulyfantasticme In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2009-11-21 18:22:22 +0000 UTC]

yeah.

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Railwolf [2007-11-05 23:31:40 +0000 UTC]

man...the scary part is thats true. Recintly satalite photos showed an ilegal salvage ship moored above the wreck site. It seemed they were atempting to dregde the debrie feld!!! Humens are so crule. Let Titanic rest in peace!!!

Great story so far, very iteresting take on it!!

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to Railwolf [2007-11-06 01:11:19 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you so verry much...lol. glad to see new people enjoying my story. this is the first of a trilogy. i always enjoy reading feedback, thanks for the comment

and YES humans are so cruel!!!

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Railwolf In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2007-11-06 02:13:30 +0000 UTC]

I've always been fasinated by the Titanic...I've bult sevral models of her. And also have models of both Olympic and Britannic!!! I'm kinda an amitur Olympic Class historien. lol

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to Railwolf [2007-11-06 02:38:32 +0000 UTC]

COOL! always glad to meet fellow ship buffs...lol. well let me know how you like my charaters...i always love to know where i need to tighten up so i can keep every thing "ship shape"...lol

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Railwolf In reply to THEGREATTITANICCHICK [2007-11-06 02:41:19 +0000 UTC]

Well...to be honist I too always emagned Titanci with a face. But I always though that her mouth would be were the forward Anchor hole is, and her eyes the bridge wing cabs! But other then that I'm loveing it. A constint battle with salvages. Man, I too di a Titanic novel like that a while back. But insted of salvagers it was pirates she had to go up ageinst!!! lol, But I love the originality of yours. Its really good. Trust me, you have a wtahcer in me!

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K9-The-First [2007-09-01 20:11:51 +0000 UTC]

Actually, the Wheelhouse was like that when Dr. Ballard found the wreck, same with the Staircase: Victem to the forces of the sinking, time and the elements.

..........................................................Unless this was your intent.

*reads authors comments* AH! That explains it.

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THEGREATTITANICCHICK In reply to K9-The-First [2007-09-01 20:19:06 +0000 UTC]

yea, that was my intent...lol. i didn't want to have another "lets drool over the grand staircase session" like every other book has so i did this intead, and sence this woujld relate more to liket he "body parts" of a ship it worked much better...lol

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