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TheHunter1338 β WIP *needs title*
Published: 2014-05-31 17:58:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 10882; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 104
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Hey there, I finally had motivation to draw something new. Here's a cute girl locked and tickled.Do you like the style? What can I change? Can you imagine a story behind this picture? What about the colors? Comment!
Finished version HERE
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Lovely work in progress. I like her expression a lot!
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Her biting her lower lip with her eyes crossedΒ makes for an interesting expression thatΒ you don't usually see. I like itΒ
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I use this expression very often
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I think Balkan Predator's idea is best: she wanted an exercise to tone her tummy. The devious tickler offered to help...
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Style is good, a cute strained look on her face and smooth anatomy. Not a bone out of place. X3 For some reason my initial reaction was blonde hair XD I don't recall many blondes showing up around here. And that bet idea I gave suggested is my thoughts on the scenario. ^^
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Thanks 
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Welcome X3
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Love the progress of this 
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Thx! Good idea
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Well she's in yoga pants(or jogging pants, don't know the real name
As for the speech bubbles:
(trying to hold her laughter in)
-I still don't get what kind of training this is.
-It's, uhh... For endurance!
This is just a suggestion
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Good idea, but they're supposed to be normal jeans XDΒ
Otherwise your idea would have been great!
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I thought it was a stripe on the side of the jeans
Thanks, it was worth a try
Or perhaps:
-Remember it's an additional fifteen minutes if you laugh^^
-Not fair!
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That's also great
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sweet work dude, you have a nice pose, the expression looks pretty good, the perspective pretty awesome too , and my favoite hte feet loos so big XD i voe this work
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Thanks xD I'm happy you like my work.
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i love your work dude XD its always exciting to see X3
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Glad you think so! Do you have any suggestions for my questions?
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First, can you make it a JPEG instead of a TIF so we can just view it instead of having to download it? Second, not a huge fan of how her nose looks, but Idk what to tell you to make it look better
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I thought it's already JPEG or PNG o.o I'll change that for sure.Β
I'll have a look at my tutorial and rework the nose.
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I just think it can be cuter. XP
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can't change the main file, but here's the updated nose:Β
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Sure, but I'm happy with the nose now, no need to adjust the nostrils.
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Alright. Well, it looks perfect now! Can't wait for you to color it!
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Well, if no one else has something to say, I'll probably finish it today
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I'm pretty sure you're good!
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I'd make her nostril a bit taller, let me know if you don't know what I'm talking about, but that looks much, much better.
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