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ruuk-ve [2013-11-03 04:39:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Another really really mixed prompt. I still don't see how you can do this sort of stuff, man... I need organization- it all being set out in blocks in front of me. I don't have a clue if I could ever take those ideas and make a story at all with them.
However, this piece is extremely good. I absolutely couldn't stop reading it, friend. Excellent work! I loved it.
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TheJDWiley In reply to ruuk-ve [2013-11-03 06:59:12 +0000 UTC]
You shower me with praise! Thank you so much! This prompt was very difficult, because there were actually TWO ties on the votes. It can be a challenge getting the ideas to fall in line with the prompt. It took me three days to really refine it before I had the final version firmly set in my mind.
I'm glad you liked it!
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ruuk-ve In reply to TheJDWiley [2013-11-03 07:07:12 +0000 UTC]
The dialogue is absolutely impeccable. It's perfect! Your characters were really popping!
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TheJDWiley In reply to ruuk-ve [2013-11-03 07:36:53 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks! I just wrote what I felt, and the characters did all the work themselves!
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ruuk-ve In reply to TheJDWiley [2013-11-03 07:41:59 +0000 UTC]
Well, they certainly did a great job then!
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