Comments: 22
Gequibren [2018-09-29 00:58:39 +0000 UTC]
Hello ! I'm from projectComment
I haven't played the video game on which the drawing is based but I already made a comment a few weeks ago about it, so I remember some things that I was looking online at that time. Anyway, I've looked at the characters again in pictures to compare them with the ones you've made.
What stands out most of the image is that it's attractive to see so many characters together. It's something that has always attracted me when an artist has done something similar. Also, doing something of this style requires a lot of patience and time. +1 for you !
Another thing that I like is the stroke in border lines, the colors and the shading that you have applied. I see everything quite accurate and the reflections of light highlight the armor of Asgore and Mettaton are awesome ! The casted shadows all fall in the same place coinciding in all the characters, so that is another point in favor for the whole illustration.
I also see that you have given a different pose and facial expression to each character, which is appreciated to bring dynamism, variety and personality to each of the members of the image. In that aspect I think you've also made it very well! My favorites are Asriel and Toriel because they have a very natural and attractive poses and expressions
Now I will comment on some things that could perhaps be improved:
- Asgore and Alphys suffer from the same problem, they have a nose or mouth with a flat appearance due to the lack of shadows and reflections. Asgore also has a beard and a little small mouth, resulting in something strange. Perhaps widening the mouth would allow the beard to look more natural.
- Undyne needs more feminine shape. For example, making the waist, the neck and the shape of the head a little thinner and more stylized.
- The appearance of Papyrus is good in general, but it seems that it is located on the ground a little apart from the line where all the others are.
- Frisk, Chara and Flowey have pretty simple designs, so there's not much to say. Nice drawings
- Sans is great, his smile is characteristic and I think it's perfect.
- Mettaton, as I said, has some fantastic reflections on the armor. I also like the details on the chest, the white glow of the heart at the waist, even the pose is great. But in the face it is noted that you had a hard time to made it well the inclined pose. It's normal, because it's a complicated pose. Perhaps the mouth should be moved a little to the left and adjust the rest of the parts. Studying photo references should help
- Muffet in general aspects is well made, but the arms don't match in size and length.
- Temmie is great, but the lower part of the mouth looks a bit forced. In the reference pictures I've seen, there is usually less deviation.
Finally, talking about composition ... why have you placed the characters that way? In my opinion it's great, remembers me to the typical image of criminals posing in a police station Although it would have been interesting to do an alternative version in which the characters were located from the smallest to the highest from left to right for example
Did you put the height of every character according with your imagination or this was founded somewhere? I've seen several images on internet trying to show something similar to you... and there is variety.
Good luck and keep going!
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JimmyG18 [2018-07-12 17:53:08 +0000 UTC]
to bad i rilly caant tell how tall that rilly is as i am feet not meders
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decepticonaiden [2018-07-09 14:00:28 +0000 UTC]
There is a lot done right with this piece. I really like the shading and colouring, and I think you did a fantastic job on Asgore’s armour. Also, for the most part, the proportions are very good. I do really like how you didn’t just give each character a static pose, instead giving them a unique pose that shows off their personality (especially with Metaton). I have a few problems, though. One thing is that some of the faces seem to be off. Asgore has sort of a doozy grin rather than what I assume was supposed to be a loving smile. I would suggest studying facial features, or even looking to cartoons for inspiration and seeing how they would do a similar expression. In the same vein, Sans looks more sneaky and cunning than relaxed and apathetic. All you have to do to change that is just flatten out the eyebrows. All around, I think you should try and practice faces. Another thing I’d like to point out is that Mettaton’s head doesn’t seem right. I think you should try drawing from reference to get the head tilted back look right. The last thing I’d like to point is Temmie. She seems to be drawn in almost a completely different style than everyone else, to the point it seems distracting. Perhaps you could try stylizing her a bit less, but I’m not really sure if thst’s what needs to be done. I’m certain that you can figure out what to do with it. This is not a bad piece, by any means. Like I said, there are a lot of things you did right, and just judging by the quality of the picture, I’m willing to bet you put a lot of work into it. Just keep these few things in mind, and I’m sure it will make you a better artist!
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Thelightsmen In reply to decepticonaiden [2018-08-07 18:46:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your comment and the kind words!
I really love the concept that every character in UT has to be their own individual, so I always try to portray personalities when drawing these characters .
The facial expressions were done on purpose like that. Asgore (At least my version of him) is always smiling, but due to events within the game it always looks more uneasy, hence the picture; Regarding Sans, I never really thought he would give that impression, if anything he looks normal to me .
You're right about Mettaton and Temmie though, I'm still trying to get faces looking up right, and that temmie was the first one I ever did so it only makes sense she looks weird haha.
Anyways thank you for taking the time to review these designs, glad you like the majority of them!
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Eternal-Shadow-S [2018-05-30 10:52:17 +0000 UTC]
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Not a bad pic you've got going on here. The coloring on the overall characters is decent. The shading on them adds quite a bit of depth and dimension to the characters. The shading is pretty simple, but it enough to make them really stand out. The lighting on the metal parts gives that glossy feeling on the characters, making them really look shiny. So good job on those parts.
Now, I do have a few nitpicks I'd like to point out. First would have to be the expressions. In my opinion, they look a little too exaggerated. Of course this doesn't apply to all of them, characters like Asriel are fine, but the ones that kinda have this problem are the ones with their mouths open, or are showing their teeth. I'd suggest making the smiles perhaps a bit smaller to make them look more relaxed.
Next, Muffet's arms don't seem proportionate with each other. One looks so much thicker than the rest, while another looks just less. Rather than raising thickness, I think it'd be better if their arms were all slimmer like the four, so they would also fit the size of her body.
Regardless of these things, this is still a pretty good pic. Great job!
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toffyflame [2018-05-07 17:44:52 +0000 UTC]
I think this Height chart is very accurate except I think sans should be smaller but that's okay
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Thelightsmen In reply to toffyflame [2018-05-13 06:07:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
Just asking but why do you think sans should be smaller? how small exactly?
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toffyflame In reply to Thelightsmen [2018-05-14 22:24:31 +0000 UTC]
So that his height is a bit more noticeable when compared to papyrus.
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TheThunder-Art [2018-05-07 02:44:20 +0000 UTC]
Was Undertale trying to be the next best thing to Spirited Away?
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Thelightsmen In reply to TheThunder-Art [2018-08-07 18:46:40 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps? I would like to see it animated at some point in my life.
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AurinMantus [2018-05-07 02:40:52 +0000 UTC]
this is soooo awsome QwQ
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SansFangirl4life [2018-04-20 00:23:37 +0000 UTC]
of course Mettaton is posing XD everyone looks awesome!!!!!
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AutumnTheCuzzy [2018-04-19 22:54:19 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic headcanons!!
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Michael-Vykos [2018-04-19 21:20:53 +0000 UTC]
wow, so cool!
Straight to favs.
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Zockie-P [2018-04-19 21:10:43 +0000 UTC]
I love how Mettaton is reaching for their people. The stars XD
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