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TheLionWolf77 — Biram: Go get that grub

Published: 2012-07-11 03:23:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description Okay, FINALLY. Here is the first page of Kiza's story. The right head's eyes are red, as you can see. Her name is Razira. The left head's eyes are yellow, his name is Ray. The whole lusus itself is called biram.

It was that time again. All the lusus's headed down towards the ocean through the bright day, stepping on the green grass as they went. The sky was nearly cloudless.
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"Finally we will get our first grub!" Razira exclaimed, perking her head up, trying to see the ocean. Ray was confused though, his head was hanging low to the ground. "Yeah, but where are we going? What is her name? What's her blood color?" Scordad, Ray's soon-to-be lusus came up with Nia's lusus on his head. The cat on Scordad's head started to speak to biram. "My name is Furrious, and this is Scordad. I can tell you all about your grub" she waited for the giant two-headed dragon to reply. Ray turned his dark yellow pupils over to the cat and opened his jaw to start to reply "Well, some details would be nice." Furrious curled her cat mouth into a cute smile and nodded. "Her name is Kiza Captor, a girl, a lowblood. Her blood is neon green." Razira looked surprized as Ray looked up at her in shock. "What..." he didn't say another word, he could only stare at the ground after that. Razira looked back forward, and smiled. "Ray, don't be so down. You haven't even met the grub yet." Scordad and Furrious jumped onto biram's back as they spread their wings and decided to fly. "Woah there mate, don't be so eager." Scordad gripped the dragon's spine tightly so he wouldn't fall off. But they wouldn't slow down, going into a ring, they teleported to the other side of the ocean. The two riding on their back jumped off, Furrious waved goodbye with her tail, and started to run towards a tree-shaped hive while Scordad rushed off to a dark tunnel hive with some torches in it. Ray put his head up finally and started to speak in the same confused tone as before "If their grubs already have a hive, why is Kiza at Sollux's hive?" Razira looked both ways at the hives that obviously weren't already occupied by another troll "Well, maybe Sollux will give us directions?" she spoke worried.
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To beh continued. I really like this beginning, so deal with it. I suppose I'm getting better with titles, too. The next one will be out tomorrow probably. Just keep in mind, this story will be VERY long. Just like the webcomic... homestuck >3>
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