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Another page. This is certainly my favourite so far, and not because Dash's sexy belly, because of the way it turned out.
I'm happy with the first panel, but Applejack and Twilight's eyes look kinda weird. The second doesn't look so good, becuase I wanted Derpy to look determined or standoff-ish, but instead she just looks kinda angry. The third's great, Pinkie Pie looks darn near show quality, apart from her eyes being a little small. Derpy looks just as happy as I intended.
In the fourth panel Rainbow's body looks kinda weird, but her expression is spot-on. I wanted the fifth to really be something special, but Rainbow just looks cartoony, despite how perfect Derpy turned out.
The sixth is pretty good, I think I did well capturing Rainbow's rage. The seventh is nice too, because no matter how blank Derpy's stare is, you can't take those derped eyes seriously XD
The eighth is good too, but Derpy looks crosser than I wanted. The next two look silly, but are overall okay. The two after I really went into detail with, as I hope is obvious, because I really want the vore segments to look good. They look really nice actually, better than I had hoped for. I guess I underestimate myself XD
The last is great. Took a bit, but it was worth it to get just what I wanted. Dash has swallowed Derpy - let the vore commence!
Now that I've got my criticisms out of the way, let me throw it out there that I'm really annoyed with the white space. There was originally going to be more panels, but I decided it was best to end this one here before it got out of hand. It's definitely the longest one yet. I did draw my ponysona, but it'd give away my other account, so I put best pony there instead. XD
Well that was long.
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Description
Another page. This is certainly my favourite so far, and not because Dash's sexy belly, because of the way it turned out.
I'm happy with the first panel, but Applejack and Twilight's eyes look kinda weird. The second doesn't look so good, becuase I wanted Derpy to look determined or standoff-ish, but instead she just looks kinda angry. The third's great, Pinkie Pie looks darn near show quality, apart from her eyes being a little small. Derpy looks just as happy as I intended.
In the fourth panel Rainbow's body looks kinda weird, but her expression is spot-on. I wanted the fifth to really be something special, but Rainbow just looks cartoony, despite how perfect Derpy turned out.
The sixth is pretty good, I think I did well capturing Rainbow's rage. The seventh is nice too, because no matter how blank Derpy's stare is, you can't take those derped eyes seriously XD
The eighth is good too, but Derpy looks crosser than I wanted. The next two look silly, but are overall okay. The two after I really went into detail with, as I hope is obvious, because I really want the vore segments to look good. They look really nice actually, better than I had hoped for. I guess I underestimate myself XD
The last is great. Took a bit, but it was worth it to get just what I wanted. Dash has swallowed Derpy - let the vore commence!
Now that I've got my criticisms out of the way, let me throw it out there that I'm really annoyed with the white space. There was originally going to be more panels, but I decided it was best to end this one here before it got out of hand. It's definitely the longest one yet. I did draw my ponysona, but it'd give away my other account, so I put best pony there instead. XD
Well that was long.
Original: [link]
Credit to