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theluckynine — 5 o'clock
Published: 2010-08-02 13:11:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 4067; Favourites: 181; Downloads: 76
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I find all of your work to be very compelling; I could never do any better. I really like the concept you have been going with, this feels very still, lifeless, and dead.
In your other work 'here is gone' the watches were a focal point of the work, I understood that you were working with time but I did not understand the context. Here it is still clear that you are working with time, your body language tells me everything. So many watches are not necessary; the watch on your wrist is enough.
I liked the lighting in 'here is gone' much better; it set the theme and was not a distraction. In this work I find the lighting to be very un-natural. The edges are very abrupt, hard, and straight up-and-down. It feels less like afternoon and more like Photoshop.
Your eyes are great for this, maybe work on your subtlety a bit.
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it looks beautiful.. but i find the eyes look a little too edited.. :/
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I really love the composition of this photograph. What you did with the streams of light makes it all work together well.
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