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Published: 2001-06-21 18:44:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 50
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Description Intimately Touched
By
Mark A. Brickey


Slowly softly he gently kisses her sweet lips
It is the first time they will intimately touch
She is gazing deeply into his dark brown eyes
Hoping he will see that she loves him so much

Holding her close her body pressed tight to his
The smell of her saturates his heightened senses
He softly caresses her with his warm gentle hands
Hoping it will help ease down her defenses

She lovingly waits for this precious moment
So she can share with him all that she is
Their lips move closer with each passing second
Longing for the beginning, that first passionate kiss

He lovingly touches those soft sexy lips
Her tongue tasting of a delicate sweet wine
As passion takes him in both body and soul
The feelings that emerge are so hard for him to define

The touch of his body against hers so warm and sensual
The power of his passion while within his embrace
Lit a fire that burned so very deep in her soul
Leaving goose bumps every where his fingers traced

Alas the culmination of such beautiful moments
Time stood still as she let out a gasp
The feelings she had waited for her entire life
Were finally placed within her grasp

He did not know he could feel this way
He never understood how wonderful it could be
Until he lay in her arms his passion spent
He knew to his heart she held the key

She lay in his arms glowing with pleasure
Passion emanating deep from within
She now knew that with this man
A wonderful life would begin

The moral to this story is oh so sweet
Patience is a virtue; true love is worth the wait
Be gentle with the heart you hold in your hands
The course of true love you can not dictate
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Comments: 3

dor [2001-09-17 00:42:23 +0000 UTC]

I think this one so far is my favorite

atleast until I go read another one of yours...

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dor [2001-09-17 00:40:24 +0000 UTC]

yeah wow!
(thanks for your note) I came back to try to read all your work, but there is so much!
This is one I'm stunned by, not only your words are so perfect, but the rythmn & rhyming are outstanding
This is just too much to even read! hehe

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-tank [2001-06-22 04:18:14 +0000 UTC]

wow...yet another great poem...beautifull wording and imagery..,great work
-tank

-=don't fear to imagine=-

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