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Description It
By
Mark Alan Brickey

Its numerous facets are a wonder to behold
Its beauty changes with its surroundings
The heart of it glows in a million different colors
Just the sight of it is really quite astounding

What could it be?

Would it be a star that shines in the heavens above?
Shining bright enough for the entire world to see
Lighting the darkness in my nights
Leaving my world in such tranquility

Beautiful but not it!

Could it be a jewel that rests on my hand?
Lightening my heart with the wonderful glow
Guessing its value is really quite impossible
Only with your heart will you ever truly know

A joy to see but still not it!

It opens up your heart with its gentle presence
It tickles your emotions with its soft touch
It leaves you longing for soft tender embraces
Wanting all the feelings that your heart needs so much

It’s the love of a woman
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Comments: 13

lauryli [2002-05-14 19:16:15 +0000 UTC]

The thing I admire the most about your writing is the fact that you can convey emotions and their depth accurately and with perfect words. Good job!

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dor [2001-09-19 02:10:04 +0000 UTC]

How beautiful Mark, and you end w/
It's the love of a women...
but me thinks it is more the love of the "right" person...

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faithwalker [2001-05-28 23:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Well crafted and great expression!

Faithwalker

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MattSpire [2001-05-28 23:12:30 +0000 UTC]

mm, intruiging in form. it sort of mocks what is most valued in the world, what should not be most valued.. and then it wonderfully equates all that value to the love of the woman. wonderful.

im a more modest person on this sort of a subject. im too anxious about most things, too fearful of coming off as a fool but, i can see the beauty of this poem.

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netangel [2001-05-28 16:05:15 +0000 UTC]

now where are guys like you in the real world? i have yet to meet one who appreciates a woman's love in the way your poem expresses.

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skyOrange [2001-05-28 13:19:18 +0000 UTC]

your poem shines.

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rajivmathur [2001-05-28 12:17:22 +0000 UTC]

true.














~Raji


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cype [2001-05-28 07:55:07 +0000 UTC]

wow astonding poem i love it, yeah do you mind if i send this to my girl

Nicolas (Cype)
nicolas@dmusic.com

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lexch34ts [2001-05-28 06:51:59 +0000 UTC]

quite nice! only thing that MAYBE you MIGHT MAYBE POSSIBLY wanna consider is using "the" less.

-lex
-io (dyslexia strikes lonely punk rockers yet again)

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vyvyan [2001-05-28 06:35:11 +0000 UTC]


A beautiful poem, indeed. Wonderfully romantic, without being trite. Great work.

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output-error [2001-05-28 05:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Oustanding work! I really like this poem. It is great Congrats on the DP.

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sumalangitnawa [2001-05-28 05:02:40 +0000 UTC]

boy are you doped!
she must have liked this a lot. congrats
..sln..

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baranromis [2001-05-28 05:01:33 +0000 UTC]

WOW..................... Can I with your premisson send this to someone who I'm trying to go out with?

Art is a deliberate recreation of a new and special reality that grows from your response to life. It cannot be copied; it must be created. -Anonymous

BaranR

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